
I haven't seen a dryer story than this in so long. Pffftttt. All the characters have absolutely no life. All of em are so lame
I am no writer but the Wattpad fanfic i wrote for saske and sakura when I was 13 had a better storyline than this pffftttt and i never even dare upload it coz it was bad and this is worse than thathow do stories like these even get funds to get published is so beyond me lolololol

Author needs therapy. They're going through some deep shit in their life. I just read a few starting chapters and i haven't dropped something as fast as I did this. I can't believe someone is writing this and is mentally stable. I don't think the author is okay honestly and my heart hurts for them. I hope they get better really. Not mocking anything at all. But i think author seriously has some issues coz this is insanity.

Karel was such a gentleman and look what sasya made out of him.
I understand sasya's struggles too but what he did, he was always selfish. Everytime. From the moment they met, sasya was selfish till the end. Imagine traumatizing the only one person who cared about you so much that he becomes an entirely different entity.

you cant really blame sasya much thoo he couldnt reach karel even if he wanted to and sasya is mentally unstable all becasue of that cousin of karel who treated him like a toy who would be thrown any moment by always reminding him of his place and all. That fear instilled in him along with his trauma made him so unsocial.
Tak, What the faaacccccckkkkk???