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IF at the end of the trip he doesnt confess (●￣(ｴ)￣●)

hope there are a bunch of sides bc i need to see the baby and the little brother. also 100 chapters of not being together i need at least 20 of just happiness and good vibes

bro is annoying me like i think its fine to talk to your partner about getting hit on, but not telling and them privately hanging out with the person who hit on you and not saying that your in a relationship is one step away from cheating. like ok you dont want to out anyone but you still can say oh im in a relationship, or your dans friend so ill hang with you, or im not interested sorry like ughgg

1. she turn back time and was unable to save her mother, so i my eyes the first 6 chapters were boring and not needed, like if your going to kill the mom you dont need 6 chps to due it unless ben did it or something wild.
2. this would be a more interesting story if the mother survives and was reunited with the dad.
3. this story is missing something and i dont know what like im on chp 12 and like its boring? ig idk
4. the art is good but the inconsistencies with size is confusing
5. does the author have a feet thing bc like no one wears shoes
6. so he sent her to a refugee and got zero reports (i know he go letters but like zero eye witnesses) like buddy you a beginner send guards or spys to watch over them lol
7. idk man i feel like if the mom was going to die anyways then she should be less of a regret. bc girl did nothing till after the mom died yk. like why turn back time if she doesnt get everything she wants. i think it would have been better if in her past life she learned of her father living and how ben was the little bro and that he was taking the letters, then when she turns back time she finds the letters and gives them to her mom and they run away together. or tell the mom she was from the future and how all these things are going to happen. then the story is like family building and reunited love instead of the father and daughter connection bc its like my mom died but now i have a dad so its okay ig idk
8. i wish lousie had the fathers eyes or hair instead of her mom's i think it would have been interesting point in her past life and i hate when children are copies of only one of their parents in these books bc its like i love you bc you look like someone i love not bc of who you are yk.
- was thinking about the appearance thing again and like think about how her past life would have been if she had the father's hair and the whole time she had to wear a wig and then when she a kid again we see her with black hair and it like wow he didnt just make he dress and act a certain way but also change her hair or with the eyes crazy
9. was thinking about it and ben tried to marry his niece wild even more reason for her to look like her dad just a little
10. the fashion the first time she is dressed up she is in heels and like a ball gown like what thats crazy shes 8
11. the art again bc it seems like the artist drew an adult and then just minimized the image to a child size, like chp 19 when they are walking into the dinner room why does her look like that
guys im tapping out i cant chp 21 is as far as i can go idk man there is not enough conflict or problem, no goal. the goal should have been reuniting the mom with the dad but they killed her and then the dad is super loving so like what now. the question why he thought of marrying the dame if he loved the mom idk man a plot to cause conflict and nothing else probably but the dame seems nice and the mom is dead so i feel like he should just get married then. the dad is powerful enough to hopefully kill ben and yeah the end.
12. i went to chp 103 to see how things were going and he fashion has not changed lol the dress she wears to dinner and her graduation dress are like almost the same dress
13. idk who idris is but omg he is scary looking like why is he one color like he is white zero color like author give him color i can see that they enjoy everyone having a signature color but that is too much dude looks like the villain or a ghost like its not even pretty is scary lol

1. i love the characters
2. the attachment the ppl have to the dead in this story is strong, like both families like judith bc of her purple eyes, jonas was liked bc of his face, luca the same, and than the fact that judith comes to hate luca's face bc it doesnt resemble lalisa face
3. luca's pov before we learned what we did, judith is relying on an unreliable narrator aka a young childs perspective of ppl. so of course the ppl around her felt 2d as in there were either perfect or evil, bc thats how luca saw them.
4. we can kind of guess that the present luca has already live this life and that he reversed time with his wish, so of course he wants to keep distance from ppl he cared about even more so when he believed that no one loved him and honestly even luca is viewing the world with the pov of his younger self, like no adult is honest in front of a child, so while luca believes he knows the character of ppl he also just relies on the 2d view
5. judith and ruediger are so cute
6. franz looks much more like a villain with no arm or eye lol
7. the climax kind of came out of no where but it also fits lol, like judith set up this whole plan to capture franz and then ruediger's like or assassination (=・ω・=) lol. but i hope they stretch the story more bc im not ready for it to end lol (and there are still lots of plot lines that need to be ended so)
8. judith's past, super intersting concept, and its interesting seeing things from her view, like at first with an outside view she is a villain, i mean she neglected a boy and sold him, but then with the context of how things happened we obviously feel for her. judith started taking care of luca when she was like 20ish and like girl was poor and hungry that anger had no where to go. she didnot really sell him she was just saying things out of anger and she was a good aunt at first, all her family died she struggles to stay the good aunt, depression hits and shes lost and wants something to blame, she doesnt blame luca but the person he looks like so she neglects luca, be she contunied to house him, feed him, and care for him. we even see her giving up eating so that he can eat. so yeah it was not the best but she struggled through it and its funny that even judith looked but on her past action (though she didnt know it was herself) and hated the things she did.
9. i hope we get ruediger's pov bc i would like to know how he felt through his life, honestly there is no way he liked jonas, bc jonas got almost everything he wanted and then ruediger was neglected sad. then ruediger is tasked with finding and raising jonas' physical copy like it can't be easy, so the scene on the wagon were ruediger dies saving luca, luca is told that its bc ruediger doesnt love him but its his responsibility to protect him and im just wondering what he was really thinking in those moments

i just reread all the authors works listed here and omg they use the same format for everystory like author there are more conflicts then "- we kissed but i/he pushed me away - avoid eachother - misunderstand eachothers feelings - he has a girlfriend - it was a misunderstanding (which is cleared up so quickly like?!) - confess again - wow you like me too- end -" like lol but if it works ig whatever ╮(￣▽￣)╭

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1. the ex taejung, he must have gone through a lot. Like his best friend and lover went missing and ig was presumed to have run away. so he had 5 yrs to go through the grief he was feeling and move on. for then his ex lover to return and taesung just doesnt know what to feel yk like your were dead and now alive im so happy but im dating someone now and yeah
2. mc wakes ups after 5 years and goes to see his lover who has moved on, and in his view this was a next day break up, like we were happy and now youre gone and thats so sad for him so ofc he wants to fight for the relationship that he has but taesung had already moved on
3. its interesting that while he remembers the love in their past relationship he hints that they have dif. views on yoon's job. and that was already causing a rift btw them bc yoon would always choose his job
4. lol realized the title tells us pretty much what the sotry is going to be about and thats just ways to move on
5. the seme is very kind i like him. like yeah he has a straight to the point and cold thing going on but hes not mean. yk.
6. youngwoo, taesung boyffiend, is toxic. like i get being insecure about your bf meeting up with an ex, BUT this is not only his ex this was his best friend and some one who had gone missing/died so it is wrong to force them to not see eachother. omg it gets worse lying about being r*ped is crazy like mental help is what you need
7. its a good thing taesung and yoon broke up.
8. taejung is not a good boyfriend to youngwoo but then the reason theyre relationship started was revealed and its like well he doesnt really want to be in this relaitonship and they have been dating about 6 months so taejung is not over yoon at all which just sucks for him.
9. honestly i just feel bad for taejung like he not over yoon bc he never got to really process his loss and now he stuck in a relationship with someone so insecure that hes not allowed to show emotions besides love and happiness like dude just needs a fresh start and therapy
10. the doctor friend is the best person here like omg hes wonderful <3
11. good ending (=・ω・=) yay

Main Story Thoghts
1. the main couple is cute will always love them

The Side Story Thoughts
2. the side story is shocking
3. i liked the side story at first I really liked dojun he is so cute and the docter is handsome, so I thought great pair great chemistry and alphaxalpha
4. the author lost the plot i feel with the docters personality, he interested in things that amuse him and he finds the dojun interesting bc hes holding back his feelings, but idk at first he had this attitude of just taking what he wanted which you can see when he lowkey forced invited himself to the family reunion yk, but he changes to be almost avoidant and afriad to stick to dojun yk idk
5. the brother thing was weird and wild like omg left field bleach my eyes i didnt need to see that
6. the Mother i like this mother BUT to name your child "attempt or challenge" is wild like do you even love him poor dojun like my mom doesnt want me she wanted an omega and hes not wrongg. ALSO do-ha asks he if dojun is adopted likes begs her to tell him that he is adopted and i assume she saids hes not adopted AND like lady you did not see that as a sign that your child has a mental problem like he needed therapy or jail !!! and we see that face she made she knew what was up and chose to ignore it idk icky so this mother is 50/50 on whether i like her or not
7. that did not feel like an ending like how do they.move on from that like dojun got raped by his brother yk cant look at doha ever again like do they tell the family that doha has romatic feels for dojun so they have to cut him out of there lives bc he will be in jailughgh
8. my poor sweet dojun he is an angel who didnt deserve the bullying, abuse, and neglect that he went through, to then not find a perfect happiiness instead he find this docter who was ruined to be a mean and uncaring person! ugh like it makes me mad.
9. and so the new ending will be that when dojun brought up marriage the docter was so happy that he brought rings the next day and when they left to go live together he had a big proposal set up to ask dojun to marry him. and they lived so happily and dojun goes to therapy to help is anxiety and self esteem. and doha goes to jail and then falls off the earth for all i care. <3 the end

1. it was good
2. was worried how the author was going to make them fall in love but it worked out nicely
3. everyone had a tragic back story
4. choi needs to get the fuck out like boy im kill you (๑•ㅂ•)و✧lol
5. the baby is super cute
6. i also hope that he gets so money or even the company lol bc that would be a good way to piss choi off also piss the jerk of a brother off who tried to fight he as a teen who also was just put into that situation and shuld have been praised for controling himself omg anger (╬￣皿￣)凸
7. i love the long hair but i also wished he would cut it so it could symbolize him starting over and leaving behind the bad memories yk