This is so rushed and all over the place, nothing the characters do make sense, the sister plot and figure is just a giant deus ex machina, in two years the brother just doesn’t’ give a fuck, the other asshole goes from asshole to jackass to gay just cause, why this kind of shitty garbage get’s the chance to get published? Idk I just wanna rant and seriously ask the author if they think this was legit the best they could do, if the answer is yes, we have a problem.
but i wanna lose my cool, so that i can have your car and the custody of your childrens sweety MightyTurkey
Oh shit! Missed this (epic?) response! Hahaha, well the car is old and you’ve obviously never had kids if you think threatening to take my kid is would be upsetting. You’re trying to get them to leave when they hit that age! Oh goodness, priceless
This is so rushed and all over the place, nothing the characters do make sense, the sister plot and figure is just a giant deus ex machina, in two years the brother just doesn’t’ give a fuck, the other asshole goes from asshole to jackass to gay just cause, why this kind of shitty garbage get’s the chance to get published? Idk I just wanna rant and seriously ask the author if they think this was legit the best they could do, if the answer is yes, we have a problem.