So, we get the R4p3 warning, and that’s ok, beyond this, nothing in this fucking story make sense, the development is made up from thin air, the side characters had no purpouse whatsoever, we have no information about the characters, seme is just a raging dick, the student is just so stupid is beyond me, goddamit this shit is stupid, the excuse for the gang rape scene is ridiculous, cuz idiot-students can’t just reply “what hour?” No, he must just show up because DA PLOT, sweet mother of mercy, this yaoi is a crime against creative writing on par whit webtoons.
I'd say that you lost me whit the personalities switching to one another mid sex(was that supposed to be funny? author had a stroke? have they reached enlightement?) but that would be a lie, I've been lost long way before while reading this messy trash.
It's possible, it's just normally mentally and even physically exhausting.
Messy trash? This manga was amazing...
Yes, this manga was amazing af
yesh! another rapist blackmailer, that's the kind of garbage plot that i needed, go on uke! fall in love with that asshole because "DA PLOT"
The dicks are drawn nice at least
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well, those shure are some odd body proportions, author has really improved in the anatomy field over time
So, the art is clean and pretty and that’s ok, the plot is kinda a mess, the story seem rushed, like, a lot, the plot points felt like made up from thin air, and in general there is no development, we start from a guy ringing a doorbell claiming to be a sexdoll(???) we explore the life of the protagonist, he rides a motorcycle, a random blowjob in the middle of the night (????????????) and the the last 2 chapters are just a spot to tell us how beautiful is to have a baby, nothing wrong with this, but this is not the type of story for a 5 chapters BL, it’s not even a real story, whatever.
I respect your opinion but there's a bit more to the story than that! The last few chapters were also where it reveals that the seme and uke were actually from the same orphanage growing up, so it wasn't just about the baby. Coming from someone with step-parents, I'm really glad we got to see an adoptive family that finally wasn't abusive.
Overall, I agree that this manga's plot isn't very deep but you can't really expect every read to be a masterpiece ^o^
Cooking for random people has became a trope on it’s own, stupid yaoi logic
stfu
I like tbh I think cooking and sharing can be very romantic or if not a very gentle act so I always appreciate that (づ￣ ³￣)づ
Oooh, we have a special snowflake!
which one is a snowflake when u are the one complaining abt a story line?? Mf u r the flakies
Well, to my knowledge, calling out bad writing isn’t being a flakies, On the other hand getting triggered cuz somebody criticized your favorite garbage media is something a snowflake would do, don’t you agree?