
During the rape scene the alpha actually asked the omega "do you want me to stop?" Idk if it's considered as concent but the omega actually said "don't stop". Obviously it was because of his omega instict where he can't control his mind and body, but so does the alpha who was controlled by the omegas pheromones. Maybe the rape part wouldn't have actually happened if the omega said stop? But he let the alpha do it so yeah. I'm also not saying the rape part is good it is pretty harsh just because you are being controlled because of your sex and status. But this is pretty common in omegaverse and tbh this ain't that bad compared to others which is way worst.

Uh first of. Where is the sister rn? Did she not care about her own children and just left? I think she divorced with the seme and that's why he ain't looking for her but him running to his wife's brother and asking no actually forcing him to take care of his children as if he can't take care of them on his own, such a failure as a father tbh he doesn't even care about them. Second, bruh uke needs to stop. Was it 3 years? Since his crush and sister married how can he not move on with that amount of time?? And even if he can't, he ain't even thinking that's his sister's husband and should stop liking him anymore but instead he's lusting over his pajamas in his sister's house. Third, title doesn't even relate much to the whole story, probably just one scene where the baby suck his nipples and that is it wth. Forth, no good character development? Seme is %100 jerk and is still %97 jerk. Their ain't fluffy dad and children time, the romance between the two was rushed, we can't even see the character's feelings/pov. Yes you can't expect much for a oneshot yaoi but this is just my opinion and maybe it would help to improve plot and characters make them more likable. The art is good but needs improvements with the story.

I mostly hate ukes that don't fight back especially when they actually can. This reminds me of http://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/scandalous_m/ but the difference was that the uke actually fights for the seme in the end. So I'm hoping this uke will have character developments soon and fights for his seme otherwise I'm dropping this. (〜 ̄△ ̄)〜
Whyyyyyy!??? Huhu stop playing with mah heart (/TДT)/