
itonagi is so cute he's so fuckinh precious man if i was sanada i'd do him everyday too cus man looks so adorable like wym he got cresent for eyes??? that shit's so fucking cute?? he's so awkwardly adorable that you just want to shelter him from the world and constantly shower him with praises and affection cause that's what he deserves like props to his parents for birthing such a wonderfully adorable wholesome big hearted man that holds the beam of the sunlight in his smile and the light of a thousand stats within those beautifully gorgeous eyes and his lases are so on fleel that i kinda wanna lick it like fuck sanada not cus i hate him for an immature mistake but cus he can get this adorable beam of sunlight just for himself like I WANT AN ITONAGI IN MY LIFE TOO PLEASE

gys pls why r some of u so pressed ths is fictional ?? no ones stopping u from dropping ths ??? i get that u can have ur own op n shi but lke ofc u can't expect these assholes to act right. it'll be weird if they did (lowk would be impressed if the author did take that route). they grew from unstable households so ofc they're gnna grow to b unstable...
thas js my 2 cents cs i lke reading drama n seeing assholes b assholes.
ive seen my share of stories like these but this one has to go to the "switching my brain off if i read this" department cus everything's too fast like i wish the story was executed a little bit better
and i dont even mean the art cus i can bear w generic & stiff pixels, it's the pacing that needs to be improved me thinks.
i guess like i don't get why ml is clinging to mc?? like ik he's a pretty boy and he cries a lot cus he's mentally fucked and exhausted but that can't just be it?? (although this isn't really a good critique cause the story isn't even halfway done yet i'm just plenty confused and at the same time just taking shit at face value)
I feel as thought everything’s happening so slow mann. USUALLYY there would be a dumb abstract plan or some type of defiance from the MC but realistically would u even attempt to flee from a guy who can give rid of you at any moment? The Mc is rightfully shitting himself at every moment . But I’m reading for the toxic brain rot so I’m not complaining ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭