I hate how this has so many loopholes like
WHERE'S THE THOUGHT PROCESS?? IT DOESNT MAKE SENSE
A normal person's reaction would be to feel resentment but just that, WHAT LED TO U THINKING
"Oh he kidnapped me to LOVE ME AND RAISE ME AS HIS OWN SON?
Fuck I gotta get revenge by fucking him in the ass"
Legit there are plenty other ways to get revenge other than raping him, the author just lacks creativity.
Plus tell me why
AS A KID WHEN I WAS 4, I ALREADY KNEW WHO MY PARENTS WERE i already knew what stranger danger was. So tell me why he just blindly accepted him as his father?!?
Like he a grown child at that point, dont tell me he just believed him "oh youre my dad and im gonna stay with you from now on"
Like u dont even remember the mom and dad that u were with for 4 years? Your childhood home? Your friends maybe??
LIKE how did he manage to convince the child that he was his dad??
LOOPHOLES EVERYWHEREE
I get that its supposed to be psychological and fucked up but AT LEAST make sense and give us the reasoning on why he turned out that way and why he wanted to rape and beat him when
He was literally raised lovingly
The dad did not best him up or sexually assault him, he was just trying to be a dad
How is raping a revenge, i wouldve understood if he did the same but considering he doesnt even have any memories of his parents i wonder what drives him to do all that shi and go out of his way, because u felt the 10 years of your life was a lie? I guess he just wanna be petty now and wants to make him feel the same, but wouldnt that mean you also having to live a lie for another 10 years? But who am i to know what's supposed to be in a psycho's mind anyway
Idk but reading this was kinda off putting to me
Like the art is good ill give u that, and there was consent in everything
But i feel like the ml kind of led mc around
Like it felt like the mc hand no choice but to give in to ml's wishes just because he's a close friend that he cherishes. But who am i to say, for all i know maybe he just couldn't resist him.
But for me it was weird, like even towards the end felt like he was forced to say it because most of the time he doesnt have a say in stuff because ml is so proactive and leads the conversation, he even took it upon himself to say "you like me right? Say it properly" before hearing mc out or asking him how he feel, if i was asked that too, on a separate situation, i feel like I would be pressured to say yes coz of how pitiful it would be if i said no and hurt his feelings.
But anyways those are just my thoughts, it does not fully reflect the story, im just speaking from a different point of view if he *WAS* indeed pressured into it
But since its not and they might actually genuinely like each other then good for them I guess
It was an okay read the characters were likeable ig
Its good that they came to terms with the whole situation and like each other
Also it wouldve been interesting if they added a part where they show them in game like telling ppl the truth or maybe even telling them they're dating
Its kinda sad how thy just ended it without seeing the gameworld friends one last time, was curious abt that
The ending was good but THAT WAS IT?
I FEEL LIKE THERES A LOT OF THINGS THAT NEED MORE, WE NEED SIDE STORIES
SHOW US THEM DATING OR MARRIED
THEIR COLLEGE LIFE
And also
FUCK YOU GEONGWOO U THINK U CAN JUST GET AWAY WITH THAT SHIT
Am i the only one fucking pissed about what he did?? The fucker stole his design and sells it to people, its even THE BEST SELLER
HES A FAKE getting rich from a stolen design idk im just so mad
But anyways i love the both of them and how they love each other, there were many times that i got pissed at either of them because of their actions or how they're reacting to stuff but i guess thats just how they are
In the end im happy they got back together, wouldve been nice to see them and the whole friend group go on a trip together and maybe officially come out to them
And also the parents, I feel like it wasnt explored very well
They did mention going on a dinner with his parents after telling them they're dating but it never happened because of them breaking up
But it would've been nice to see it
Anyways I feel empty now, it couldve been perfect if there were at least some side stories or even an author's note
Do you think they will cpnfess to their ol friends about being together? Or...
Also was it just me that found it odd how the ml confessed to the mc at the start like
He never rlly explained how he came to like mc and we dony rlly know the reason why
Like he just all of a sudden confesssed right after hearing mc had a wet dream abt him
Idk i just think it was a loophole and i didnt get to understand ml's feelings that much and how it came to that










Dont judge a book by its cover is so real
(Both mentioned in the story, and the actual cover)
At first glance id think it was a typical smutty omegaverse but its actually GOOD
I'm staying for the story and how this goes, so so invested
Nathaniel is attractive n all but he looks like he's up to no good at all