I hate when MC’s claim to have read so many bl manhwas and then can’t see tell tale signs of trying to fix the plot not work. Even if you’re trying to get them together, you’re going about it ALL WRONG. At least find out why he’s obsessed with you. The plot already deviated since he started being obsessed with you, trying to folllow the existing plot won’t work. The moment you rejected him YOU CHANGED THE PLOT!!
Author acting like they’re not the one who made Khalid do something irredeemably evil and then proceeds to keep force feeding him down our throats. Like bro get him off my screen. Don’t piss me off.
I love the thing we’re artists draw for others to congratulate on their completion. It’s so cute!!
> So many things about this don’t make sense if she’s really blind so she’s probably pretending to be blind for sympathy.
> that child is also probably not even his, he’s going to lose his wife and everything because he’s dumb asf.
Can someone tell me why there’s a third life? I saw in the comments that there’s a third life. Does something go wrong in this?
If he actually follows through, I’m going to be so mad. Everyone involved is so dumb.
I know Cesare is the ML I’m just so confused how they’re going to walk back the “we’re
Siblings and we don’t have feelings for each other” story. The whole world is going to think they’re jncestuous
I want her to just end up with esdra or whatever but I saw Cesare on the cover and cried
Don’t even waste your time with this shit. I was so pissed off j went to read the novel and it really gets worse. If you’re expecting the ML to change and become a better person, that will literally never happen.
The authors acts just falls into the lazy writing where they make the MC think he’s in love with him because he’s been raped multiple times and “didn’t hate it”.
There wasn’t a single time this guy did anything to deserve being “forgiven” and yet it seems like everyone around the MC is gaslighting him into thinking he’s overreacting for not wanting to be with a RAPIST who imprisoned him and forced him into a relationship. Even after finding out that MC has been harassed since he was young and told that “he was born to seduce people” he doesn’t flinch and admits that he enjoys harassing MC and making him miserable. And the authors is just like “oh yeah he’s a villain, he doesn’t care” like bro what??
Honestly, I respect them for not trying to give him a sad sob story cause that would have pissed me off even more. The only thing I could think off as I read the novel was “die and kill yourself”. This nigga is unapologetically a terrible person till the end when it’s time to emotionally manipulate the MC. And the CRAZY PART… HE COULD HAVE BEEN EMOTIONALLY MANIPULATIVE FROM THE START.
He could have pretended to be a good person and coax him into falling in love with him and doing what he wants but NOOOO he decides to be a terrible person for NO REASON!
This is just like a really bad book. I didn’t realize books this bad were still being made. Like it’s just terrible, even turning off your brain isn’t enough, there’s just NOTHING. Characters are flat. Story is nothing special. The writing is ABYSMAL. 0/1000
I really hope this doesn’t drag on. It doesn’t have enough “plot” for that
