This story literally could have been over in a chapter if shion had just gone to the convenience store and stolen something (lol)
Also, ending didn't make sense... Shion didn't actually sin because ibuki technically stabbed himself.
ALSOOO why do they keep having sex throughout the story??? It obviously didn't work the first time, try something different, guys!
It was a great story tho, I enjoyed it











I feel like the seme could have been more yandere, but its ok. Its a good read, 6/10