I like the idea, but the art could be better :(
I don't see anything wrong with the art. ┑(￣Д ￣)┍
It's cartoonish. Look at some very artistic japanese manga. I'm always wondering why every mahnwa gets such high ratings despite the bad drawings and the simple story. I think most brains work like that: color = good. I enjoy 19 days, Warehouse, Killing Stalking and Tower of god. So I'm not against webcomics. Some are brilliant and well drawn. But this work looks very mediocre.
Everyone have their own of art style, so its up to them want to make it however they like.
Well, that doesn't change the fact that some artists are highly talented and others not. Look at works like "Vinland Saga" or "Vagabond". And then compare it to this work. It's almost funny how bad it is.
I think that's rather rude. There is nothing wrong with the art in this. It's like comparing a Rembrandt to a Picasso or to a Dali. They are different styles. And while you may not care for the look of one style, it does not mean the art is "bad" or that the artist has no talent. I personally like the artwork in manga like Saver....but that doesn't mean I can't appreciate the style in manga like Vagabond, or this one. Even when you look at American comics, you will see a vast difference in style from one artist to the next when it comes to how they draw the same character (have you seen how many different looks Batman, Superman, and Wonderwoman have had over the years?) While I may not care for the art of some of it, I would never be so presumptuous as to insult the artist and call their work "bad" or compare it to an entirely different artist's style.
I think it's very rude of you to say this art is bad and then go compare it to another artist. You must not know much about artists.its a style, a style this artist has chosen to create a story using, and personally in my opinion I think it's a cute style that fits the art. So to say the art is bad because they didn't draw it how you wanted is just plain rude. And no they aren't talented but neither any of the other artists you mentioned, talent is natural born. This artist is skilled, spending years to learn how to draw and if you can't respect that please don't comment.
Art is subjective thin personally for me the art is good and give a light feeling.
Subjective thing*. * (╯°Д °)╯╧╧
Korean webtoons are usually photo-realistic with overly-cartoonish heads. It took me awhile to get used to it, especially the fact that 90% of them trace over photographs for bodies &/or backgrounds. Then again, anime is doing that now too....The tracing thing. It's all rotoscoped these days. I can understand the tracing now...It's a budget time-saver that helps the artist meet tight deadlines.
So much wasted potential! Art is good. It's not perfect, but I like it a lot. Story could have been good too, but no, it feels rushed, the sex is strange ... no need for romance, but well, not to mention the SPOILER rape at the end. I have read many alternative universe djs, but that's not a good one. Curtain Call from H-eichi is something that comes to my mind.
So I guess you didn't notice that page 47 ends with the words, to be continued.
Well, how does that change that the story is bad? You cannot save it with a good end. But nice to see people are sensitive about critism like always.
Ikr
Thank you for the translation. Don't listen to the negative people.
I agree! translating is really not easy at all, good job! and thanks!
I gave this manhwa 5 stars a long time ago. I will change the rating if nothing bad happend between them in high school. I think it's just too much that someone shows up 9 years later without any good reason and rapes his old schoolmate like that. The explanation "scar face rapes him because back then he was ignored by the other guy or he didn't return his feelings" is just not good. Others may like this approach, I'm disappointed. And thinking that in chapter 24 this new guys show up, it seems there will be an end to all the rape and we know NOTHING.
I would love to see that something really bad happend back then. But for me it only feels like scar-face is crazy.
funny how I loved this from the very beginning and nobody seemed to be interested in it now everyone is like I NEED MOOOOORE
not just you fam (๑•ㅂ•)و✧
for real who? they must have not read enough twisted?
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Only 10 chapters were online and people were complaining it was going nowhere. They compared it with Killing Stalking saying this is not as good.
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Good art, nice storytelling, but at the end it's only cheesy trash. No need to convince me otherwise. It reminds me of "Wild Rock"
Bitch, like what did you expect? It's a western style manga so of course the ending is gonna end in the typical sheriff literally risking his life to save people and shit.
(Sorry for calling you a bitch. I'm pretty drunk right now.)
I agree, there is no plot development, or character depth. They are all really simple things.But I kinda fancy the cowboy/aborigen (I think that is how it's said, English is not my native language) thing.
Who needs plot when Toto beckons so erotically?
I liked it more when I didn't know what they were saying ... It's pretty ugly :(
Thank you for translating anyway! <3
First of all, THANK YOU for the better image quality compared to the last chapter. Second, I like this mix of flash backs and actual story. You get a better understanding what happend between them. I really hope there was something very bad at the end. Even though the kidnapped guy played with the innocent child who was madly in love with him, it doesnt' justify all the rape. I sooo hope the kidnapper is more than just a crazy psycho who got heart broken.