Jaeha needs to be taught how to receive love properly. This is like trying to brush a dog's teeth. Bitch won't stop squirming. I suggest Eunho tie him down and just repeat over and over again that he loves him. If that don't work, cold turkey. Eunho drops off the face of the Earth until Jaeha is sobbing and searching for him on his knees.
《(● = (エ) = ●)》THAT ENDING WAS FLATTER THAN A LOLI'S CHEST.
*DEEP BREATH* OKAY, so there are too many hastily tied loose ends here. She was on the perfect path to serious character development and just dropped the motherfuckin ball. White haired love interest whatever the hell his name is, has revealed NOTHING with his flashbacks. Sure we know more or less what happened but nothing of the thoughts in his head, emotional journey, nada. Now MC fucking kills me. His thing is that he remains the same, right? Okay, fine. But wtf is with the flakiness of his original character and then being suddenly thrust into moe uke mode? No. Nono. I really feel that a lot couldve been done with playing with the possibility of keeping the other body alive. Infinite possiblities for dramatic plot twists that actually arent cliche. But lets put that aside. THE BROTHER DID NOT SUFFER. He had his little breakdown but the confrontation shouldve been more final in the sense of "YOU DID ACTUALLY MURDER YOUR BROTHER" even if the prick doesnt believe it, I'd like to see the descent into insanity, guilt, and doubt. Lastly, Mr. Charming Villian/rapist(?) seriously needs a backstory and a connection to the other main characters besides boredom. Theres many other things but look, I did love the story, the reason that I'm so harsh IS BECAUSE IT HAD SO MUCH POTENTIAL.
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I think this story's fantastic actually. Sure, the semes are fickle as fuck but it keeps the story bouncing just enough to continue but not enough to be annoying. Plus, the incest thing is complicated so its completely reasonable to fall back on it. Idk, I like the story. Just wish red demons nose wasnt so distracting lol