
I feel like the story was very confusing in the beginning and I almost couldn't understand what was going on ( ̄へ ̄) Its a bit messy I guess? And in the end the uke was making a lot of weird faces and there was also the mistery of the power disappearing? Feels like someone wasn't paying attention to the plot at all... It was nice, but it's kinda bitter to realize it could have been ssoooo much better! ╥﹏╥

If you're aiming for the smut, this is gold. But I like good plots and this was a mess. Did I miss something? The twins falling in love out of nowhere kinda made me worried, waiting for a bizarre plot twist. Once I read a manga that was just like this (but no twins, just two friends "falling" for a guy) and at some point they left him all alone! Obviously in the end they were all together, but that left me traumatized I guess. I really like to see the feelings progressing and all that stuff! Can you imagine if this had a better plot and if it wasn't so short? Could have been amazing. But that's just me being annoying and not shutting up my writer side lol ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭

This is really good BUT ... They did all that sexual stuff in the same bed the kid was sleeping when they were at the hotel... Seriously... I know this is just a manga, but I hope everyone that read this know that it isnt healthy for kids to be exposed to sex when they are so young. So, remember to have safe and PRIVATE sex when near kids, guys! (▰˘◡˘▰)

Have your ever read about this subject? Because thats exactly why. They dont understand whats is going on, they dont have a body or mind prepared for that, that can lead to a lot of misunderstandings (never heard a story about a kid saying that daddy was hurting mommy?), traumas, inapropriate sex behavior later and a lot of other even more serious shit. Even while reading Yaoi we come across a lot of plots when the MC sees his mom having sex and develop some sort of trauma or messed up behavior. Im not saying this because Im "conservative", Im saying because its real and it matters for mental health. (And Im sorry if I cant explain propoerly, english isnt my first language)

Never said it was easy to have private sex with kids around (≧∀≦) But kids are super smart and curious and they notice everything, so we need to pay attention. Educating and raising kids isnt an easy job, especially when we try to think about whats best for them and start researching about it (〜 ̄△ ̄)〜
The end? Seriously? Wtf
PS: Seke is the bestest (づ ̄ ³ ̄)