I think it's the couple. I don't like them.
The Uke's too narrow-minded, who the hell thinks they can survive through college without a friend or two? Even though we don't like it, we socialize to survive. The other guy was right. Socializing and befriending is not something as easy as a natural ability, it's a skill. It's a good thing he managed to learn about it before the story ended.
I also didn't like the Seme much. He's subconsciously using the Uke to flatter himself, to make him feel good. He never made any effort to be with him as more than just a friend, which made the Uke lonelier than he was already. Prick thinks he could have the Uke whenever he wants and when he wasn't, that's when he realized how wrong he was.
The art is alright. The concept, not so much. Just ticked me off because I don't like the characters much.
In all honesty I would've wanted the other couple more. They're more interesting as characters and I believe it'd be more fun to read their love story instead of this one.
Author should answer my wishes and make them their own story .
I expected to cry. I really did. I didn't expect to cry THIS much. I cried for 3 chapters and I cried some more. Why the hell did they have to include the part where they grew old, one had to die first, leaving the other? I was like, "You left him again!" Had to cry a lot of times. I'm crying even right now!
I didn't like the cowardice of the Seme. I suppose it's understandable since they were together since they were young. They were bound to doubt their relationship. That's the downsides of marrying or dating young. You don't really know if your love is real or you just got swept away by your youth and the years together just ties you down.
I was like, "You hurt Yuki, you coward!" To the Seme. I mean, did you guys see Yuki's eyes?! They were full of life and when Akira said they should break up, the light just went out in his eyes and his face lost all emotions. It hit me real hard how hurt he was.
It's actually pissing me off a bit because the chasing arc wasn't that satisfying. Also, the damage that the Seme did after it all. He hurt not just one person, but also his wife. If he had just talked it out and fixed it with the Uke, he wouldn't have had to involve his ex-wife. Now he's someone who hurt two significant people in his life just because of his fear and selfishness
This was too realistic I cannot not be carried away with my emotions. I'm not gonna read this again unless I want my heart broken!
Anyways, the art is good, the concept is wonderful. So realistic! And the plot is magnificent! It's a golden story with a wholesome plot and I'll be danged if I ever read this again because I'm dehydrating from the tears.
The art is good. Character designs, good. The concept is great and the storyline is a little messy, but it's good enough for a short story.
Can you believe it's the 4th story I've read in 2 hours? That's how much I've been craving these short but beautiful stories.
Anyway, another short one. Twas fun while it lasted. Could've had more side stories though. Some authors are just so stingy.
Anyways, I love the story. Another one too short to enjoy. I'm honestly getting tired of these now but I can't stop myself because they're treasures. Treasures that are too small to really enjoy it.
The art was good, the concept too. It's funny how the Seme stomped on the assaulter when the bastard touched the Uke. I mean, it was a hilarious scene. Still, too short
The art is so hot. They're both so FINE. The concept is so unique and so good. It's rare to see a pair who work as investigators. I also love how they're so frank with each other.
We're not looking at an Omega who's a damsel in distress nor an Alpha who's so possessive of his partner. Frankly, they're both cool characters. It's almost a miracle to see them get along as lovers.
I wanted to see more! I wanted to see their wedding and their babies and how they'd fare as a family! Can't believe they didn't even bless us with side stories, are you fricking kidding me!
Didn't like the art much. It's not that it's bad, it's just not my type.
The story's alright. It's simple and suits the pace. Just that I didn't like the Seme's personality. He seems like he says other people care a lot about Alphas and their capabilities that's why he keeps putting himself down like that, but in reality that's what he thinks. He thinks that people actually prefer dominant and strong alphas instead of an average one like him, which is why he kept rejecting the Uke even though he's sincere.
I also didn't like the lack of backstory in the characters. They only mention some things but not enough to be relevant to the story. We didn't even get to meet the parents or meet their kids, which us a bummer.
Anyway, it's not a masterpiece, it's not that good, and it's not great in art and and story. Not here to roast the story, but that's just how I feel.
But I still liked the story. A lot of holes and gaps and has less information that any other story I've ever read. But it's such a simple story that you'd get it despite the lack of detail.
Anyway, it's a good read. Despite the lack of detail and information. Needs more work but definitely has potential.











They're so cute! I want more!!!