
the only, thing that I don't like in thethe first story is that it feels too fast and it seems like it was cut halfway. I have no issue with the character because the author can build it up more thethto normal yaoi story with selfish seme nd stuff and soon to be a cute story but they turned it into two shot which is not a very good idea.

Is it weird to say that if someone asked me "if you can fall for a guy who is the first one in your mind ?" i will answer Do Minkyu?

It might sound weird because his "charm" is non-traditionally charming. Meaning, he has a particular charm, and it takes a very particular taste to appreciate it... a *very* particular one...
I mean, he always tries to act smug about something or other, when in fact deep down he's quite insecure... But, as a potential love interest, I must say his mask of smugness wouldn't appeal just about everyone, and for many it could just get really annoying, especially if you don't get to see his insecure side often enough... Hm, wait, no... I think, even after seeing his insecure side, his smug side would still be somewhat annoying?
I mean, he's cute enough as a friend and a side character, but... if I had to put up with him 24/7? ...I think I'd probably murder him...
just few more walls darling! just few more walls you can do this!! don't settle for less!!