I was listening to the music and then when Karuna came back I was about to say, "Our babygirl is backkkk" but instead the current music's chorus interrupted me singing, "DADDY'S HOME~HOME FOR YOU~"
I agree that this story is good but the way it is executed and the storytelling (or maybe its the translations) its bad. I mean not that bad to the point I couldnt understand a word, no. What I mean is, its so bad that I dont feel the thrill, the excitement, I dont feel any emotions from it. Well except to the part where she and her family were distant, I could feel the pain a little, but still not good.
For the translators/scanlators: kindly execute the storytelling a little better, even if its not the BEST, I just want to feel the emotions from the story. I know some of the others here will comment, "Then how about supporting the author instead and read the official translations instead of complaining?" First of all, I am not complaining. I am requesting for the trans/scanlators to make it a little better. Second of all, I just want them to improve it a little bit more and use the right words for the storytelling in order for some readers like me to experience the emotions. And lastly, I am broke which is why I am reading the manhwa here, and this manhwa has a potential only to be lessened by the lack of right words in this translations. And I am not saying that trans/scanlators arent doing their best to their works, I am actually proud of their works and I support them too, I am just requesting for them to improve it.
It's not the TLs fault but that the manhwa itself is subpar. The novel was wonderful to read, it let me feel the emotions, I have yet to complete it but it definitely is a really good one.
I see, my apologies then. If only the manhwa was as good as the novel this would have been one of the good reads, in my opinion.
True indeed. I was surprised at the low rating before I started because the story was good but then I could get it since the manhwa is totally rushed and not detailed enough. The readers are not given time to ruminate on the FL's pathos and it feels bland.
I really liked the scene where she desperately searched for the ML's portrait in the gallery and her reaction after. But the manhwa didn't execute even ten percent of the feelings.
do you have the link for the novel?
The fairy who was with MC most of the time wasnt given an introduction so Idk their name huhuuu
Idk family trees are confusing cause isnt Haruto, the omega boy, Alpha MC's younger brother? And The other kid who is an alpha, the Omega MC's son? So there are possiblities that Alpha MC adopted the omega MC's son then what does it make Haruto to that Alpha boy?
Riku is Haruto's nephew bc technical he would be Haruto's brother's child
Ohhhh wait you're rightttt thanks thankssss
They should just put tragedy here...
Tragedy for plot
Tragedy for potential
Tragedy of their love
Tragedy literally fits this manhwa the best.