
To sum up, everything is amazing except that the twist made was rather boring and cliche, and the reason why that certain tragedy happened was not sufficient. The author could have made the MC die and then a twist occur: that blonde guy was just the reaper all along or that these two characters have a connection as foreshadowed in the previous chapters.
Second concept: blonde guy ML would offer his life span for the sake of the MC.
3rd concept: the MC died and he became as what the lyrics stated, If the world is ending I wanna be next to you, by lady gaga and Bruno mars.
It would really be amazing if something way more sadder occur in the current event to leave an impression to the Readers. To cliff hang them, then voila! The MC woke up in a hospital with no memories, and the doctor told him that he fell from such heights. The price he bid to the grim reaper was memory. Precious memories.
8/10 love the art style but the storyline should have been more construct with deep twist.

The way he act do depressed then suddenly be blushing at someone's abs like wtf? Aren't u worried about your old self but u kept fucking around? Realistically talking, if a person was in his shoes, they wouldn't even had the mental strength to hardened their dick. This is lame as boring and the way this bitchy male lead is acting is making me cringe. There's a lot and tons of possibilities to do but all u did was trying to be a damstrel in distress tryna be cute and fuck somebody. This is an insult to reincarnation troupe. Boring plot. The face of the male lead is meh but the Guys were hot af. The only thing pissses me fucking of is his personality. Well then, supporters of this manga, defend ur male lead who just opens his leg to someone else despite having mental breakdown. Way to go bitch
The artstyle on the game is just a bit…. Cringe? Idk I felt cringe looking at the last panel. This game thing is likely hindering the progress of the plot. More on the game event I guess. Why not just make them normal in game and not chibi?
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stop complaining no ones gonna agree w u
Ah, I meant to dislike- But srsl it's better this way because we can distinguish between the irl world and ingame world. And the chibis are really cute <3
you got free will to stop reading bruh
So real , I accidentally liked their comment too
Because drawing chibis rather than normal is easier??there probably would be less updates if the author decided to draw in their normal art style?????
You can read netkama punch tho it's some what similar
You can all disagree. Idgaf and it wont change my view. Don’t even try to contradict cuz the game plot is cliche af yall are coping so bad just cuz they’re hot? It’s okay I know this is your 2nd manhwa
Dude, chill. If you don't like it, just drop it. No one forces you to read it. It's valid to criticise it but not to diss it just because you think it's a cliché. And if you are so sure this is our 2nd manhwa, check the profilles and see for yourself. No need being a meanie because your mood is foul.
Aren't most manhwa and mangas cliche nowadays?and girl it's not a bad thing if it's soooo cliche way are you reading it?... And 'just cuz they're hot'??? pleasee there are way hotter characters out there
Girl you're just deranged
deranged but smart? more likeeee deranged and dumb