Critique Guy September 14, 2023 10:00 am

Except for all those sex scenes, this is straight up boring. Plot was nothing. Climax was too boring. Perhaps if this has a better plot it would be nice. Art style was wasted for a boring plot

    MochiYomi♥ September 14, 2023 3:57 pm

    Dude, this was a porn with plot manhwa, literally. I enjoyed for what it is.

Critique Guy September 7, 2023 8:02 pm

Idk messy plot. What was the purpose anyway? The reason for kidnapping? Or perhaps you're just a stalker?

I really don't like Stockholm syndrome but this is fiction anyways so I'm dying to know the reason! Hope it's nice and not a trash plot.
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Art was niceee

Critique Guy August 30, 2023 4:30 pm

The seme was really nice and was wasted for a trash mc. I really have the urge to drag the author and slap her work on her face. Terrible main character. A total piece of shit.

If this was another story and JK (the love interest of mc) was the main character, this current mc will have a lots of bad comments already.

The semeʼs pov was saddening and was also pitiful. Idk anymore. ( ̄へ ̄)

Critique Guy August 26, 2023 7:09 am

Nooo! Just what the heck

I like season 1 since the plot was nice and the art style was too. But how come here comes the “Ancient Times Story Flash” again

No! This kind of turnover is totally very common! I'm kind of dismayed ( T﹏T )

This one was one of my favorite after all but with backstory like this, kind of saddening. I mean, it sure is nice to tell the past, but I don't really care about that. And then again, this will totally fill up the whole season making the plot to move slower.

I'm hoping that the past story won't disappoint me. God, common plot again. There was a similar manhwa like this and it was also BL. It was like a manager that turn into a snake then there goes the storytelling of the ancient times that took up the whole seaon. Hope this flashbacks only last for 2 or 5 chapter.

Please don't be a cliche and common plot.

    Heya August 26, 2023 8:12 am

    OMG is it about that silver snake dude lol. yeah really similar with that...Forgot the title bcs it has like 7 different ones in each site

Critique Guy August 25, 2023 8:05 pm

This is truly a worth it! Though the art was messy, it's that thing that gives the spice of the story. It was nice. Also love the author for making a nice plot! Love it and totally recommended! A fluff (⌒▽⌒)

Critique Guy August 22, 2023 9:12 am

I binge read it and it was really amazing! Totally tragic and saddening! Very perfect to trigger your PTSD!

For a masochist like me who likes reading stories like these, it's actually nice! Almost getting dead, torture, mayhem, trauma, everything is perfect!

Art is nice to and so does the plot!! Totally recommended for beginners who had PTSD
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Not telling you August 21, 2023 8:36 pm

The artstyle was not my type. It's a vivid hard stroke that felt like the art is slapping you. It goes well with the mood and genre since this one is dark and psychological especially evolving obsessiveness, trauma, and rape.

Now, since I don't like it, I just read like 4 chapters then went to the ending part hehe

But when I read the ending part, although I don't get what actually happened, I just felt goosebumps. The feeling of realizing what really is and were. It seems like the male lead is happy and contented. I'm okay with that.

Regardless, the art was not to my liking but good plot. Recommend if you want to have PTSD(๑•ㅂ•)و✧

Not telling you August 21, 2023 8:23 pm

Drop at chapter 18.
The lines were so cringe it makes me go barf especially since the main point of view was the seme. The uke was so cringe like wtf giving me second hand embarrassment.

Don't get me wrong! The art style is good but just wtf the dialogues were (╯°Д °)╯╧╧

This is why I hate manhua troupe. Never failed to give me second hand embarrassment

The plot was already a cliche and with the same cringe lines with sassy tsundere whatever, it's a total no for me.

Maybe some people will find it good but not me. Hope you all don't get a goodnight sleep (︶︿︶)=凸

    Justreading <3333 September 21, 2023 8:20 pm

    Hello you might want to continue reading it cuz it's worth naman po but I won't force you (⌒▽⌒)

    Haise November 26, 2023 2:19 am

    We've been there too lmao but it gradually became so good ngl

    桜恋 July 11, 2024 11:50 am

    i get you

Not telling you August 21, 2023 8:03 pm

Hope the that first male lead will die then jing will suffer haha that sounds interesting idk. As a novel writer, I feel like there will be something tragic that'll happen soon and that will reawaken Yiroung! Just a. Author’s hunch
(≧∀≦) the reason I read this was because it has tragic tag on it anyway. The sex scene was nothing bot sloppy and boring

Not telling you August 21, 2023 5:48 pm

Welcome to another episode of “Just what the fuck happened?” I don't get it at all. The status said COMPLETED and just with that kind of chapters with boring panels of sex? Not fun at all.

The plot was already cliche and now it comes to this send help yall. Also, nice art but meh for the plot it was cringe(● ̄(エ) ̄●)

    Fudanshi 2.0 September 24, 2023 2:05 pm

    I think it was on hold though tbh this could have a better story development ༼ಢ_ಢ༽

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