So I read a small the spoiler and to those wondering if Theodore will regain his memories…
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yes he does regain them but he freaking looses the new ones he made with Lily and treats like shit again, it pissed me off. (╯°Д °)╯╧╧
From what I remember she does end up leaving, in this chapter she was thinking to herself about how she finds herself not wanting to divorce ml (obviously this is moments before the incident) so once ml starts treating her like he did before she decides there’s no reason to stay anymore. Tho I don’t remember her going back to her brothers, and I’m hoping not cuz they both suck.
I get what the author is trying to imply in this story but unfortunately it didn’t translate well, mostly due to the pacing of this, so everything feels rushed. We don’t get a timeline of how long Lily was staying at the mansion, so we never really get to see Lily be more than just a naive mc or how the relationship between her and the duchess could’ve been built up naturally. We at least get an understanding of Anna on how she feels she’s not worthy of being with lily because her childhood trauma. And it’s not like this author can’t make a good gl I love “Finding Assistant Manager Kim” it’s such a good office romance story.
Whereas this deals with pacing issues, so now it just seems like Lily is all wishy washy between two women.
I should’ve stayed curious about this one I saw a merman and i expected to see one, instead…
The pacing feels rushed so some details felt like they could've been fleshed out more but when it’s a short story you kinda have take what you can get ig. He hardly shows up in merman form anyways too. And I don’t even wanna talk the obvious issue with the merman assaulting the human.
So yeah, came here to read a bl about mermen, and I’m now leaving with just regret ( ̄ε(# ̄)Σ











I really tried giving this a chance. I’ve read man/ga/wha/huas that had terrible art style but
the stories to those made up for it. But this story just seems like a middle schoolers wattpad story. Maybe because it’s short comics from patron, but the pacing feels off. As for story wise, nothing really stuck with me, in other words, pretty forgettable apart from the art.
But hey it’s mentioned that chapters 1-11 so far is old art from 2021 and the snippets of their new art style of this year looks pretty decent, hopefully the story will match it.