well that was a plot twist of sorts.. just as I was about to get mad at the black haired dude the light hair guy just switched sides lol
ah yeyesyes add fantasy elements to the smut scenes it was so hot! Also I absolutely love that they're both equally into marathon banging. Smut is just so much hotter when they're both into it and not constantly ignored nos and stops (≧∀≦)
The ml pisses me off so much rn. The mc is trying to communicate with you you fucking brick wall. LISTEN FFS and don't force yourself on him goddamnit.
I wanna claw my way through the layers of fiction just to slap your annoying face personally
I mean the idea was fine, but I'd really want to see more couples that are equally freaky and enjoy those things together rather than one partner getting dragged along.
The constant nos and stops that are completely ignored kinda kills the vibes imo. (unless that's a roleplay situation with other safe words, which was not the case here)
OMG IT'S THIS AUTHOR NO WONDER THE ART STYLE LOOKED SO FAMILIAR
hell yess, a big guy that isn't shredded af :biting_lip:
ah how i love it when the characters just sit down and have a talk, recognize their own flaws and make up
ehhh I'm not really vibing with the direction this is going. They had such a normal and healthy relationship (by yaoi standards at least) but Ash being so pushy about the BDSM stuff kinda goes against it.
Especially since this kind of stuff should be discussed in depth before any kind of play but it's essentially just pushed upon Lyle. I know it's fiction and an omegaverse but you'd think someone who's been so considerate throughout the story wouldn't ignore such an important thing.
Not to even mention how he used sex (and a word Lyle feels uncomfortable saying as a 'safe word') as a weapon to pressure him into talking when he could've just sat him down to talk
OHHHHHH it's THAT guy, I thought it was the ex because they look so similar, and I was ready to throw hands