its actually really funny so far. all the men are shitty I hope she can escape lol
Him: kicks her into a hole, steals all her self defense items, abandons her in a woods infested with demons and tells everyone she is an air headed moron that wandered off on her own.
Her: Is angry
Him: Surprised Pikachu Face
I hope after she beats the mission she dumps his ass
This is actually really high quality. Like its a fun spin on the isekai genre All the characters are fun and interesting and the art is beautiful. 100% recommend this one its top tier. Absolutely love the FL and Sunshine
DROPPED I can't with this. Even if she comes around later and dumps his ass for real I just find this plot too.....icky to read. Like i know its just fiction but I don't like how she is CONSTANTLY being abused and taken advantage of. Like if she had come to peace with what happened and was like meh hes an ass but we had some fun and I can make some cash. I could at lease respect the hustle. Shes obviously traumatized and feels manipulated so its just. eh... And the ML....he's just a prick tbh. 0 nuance he's just a selfish asshole. TBH this whole thing reads like the unholy union of every cheap chinese manwha and 50 shades of grey.
I like how his friend is spitting a lot of hot truth at him like are you really planning to ruin an era of unparalleled peace to hassle your ex gf you cheated on who has made it super clear she doesn't want you back? Bro you gotta move on ╮(￣▽￣)╭
Usually i like when stories deviate from the standard tropey formula but this just reads like a 13 year old's edgy self insert wattpad novel. It makes 0 sense she goes from saint to psychopath. the pacing is bad the characters are shallow. the motivations make no sense. Things go from A to C and never explain what was B. Like why did the top criminal adopt some kid? how did she topple him? why even? Does she even still have saint powers? TBH why is she even mad? It seems like the goddess did her a solid sending her back to fix the future. like this is what she kinda asked for. Why kidnap a freaking DUKES son? how does that make sense? Idk this is just my personal opinion.
I get that she wanted to run away to keep her freedom and get away from his crazy ass but I also dont see how they are any safer running from one sketchy village to the next. Like she had no plan and is pretty much constantly putting those kids in danger by staying on the run. If she had just stayed she would have at least guaranteed the kids safety. like there dosnt seem to be anyone who wanted her dead it was just her paranoia that made her run. idk I just think she took the most extreme path.
I don't think her kids being known as royals are any safer especially remembering the captain's sister
With that kind of father? They’d be safer. Especially if he ordered his shadow knight to guard them through visible or invisible mode. No way the captain’s sister can get the upper hand on the emperor
I really like that they at least gave context to the time reversal this time and she wants to look into what happened. I kinda hate it when its just oh neato i have died and been reborn because of some vague reason
if yall ever see someone like the ML in real life run bitch ruuuuuun lol he's great as a character in a story but these kinds of dudes will leave you in pieces at the bottom of a river
they lost me at the totally random reincarnation bit. like....wtf is the point of that? I just spent 11 chapters with this person and they die so we get this random ass modern person in there? I was hoping she would actually get revenge on her own for once! it feels incredibly cheep if her soul is dead and some other person who has 0 reason to does it. Its a shame because there were some interesting mysteries but the unnecessary isekai just ruined it for me.