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*long rant incoming lol*

I really loved the first season, but in the second season, everyone so far has been really fucking annoying lol. The ML has gotten so pushy and overbearing and the MC always acts slow af. He also is TOO nice, which is not always a good trait. And I never EVER even liked pink hair guy (still dont). And even though the Ml is pushy af , im iknda on his side about now wanting to be around pink hair guy. He was constantly harassing the ML and even tried to fore a kiss on him. But of course, the slow ass MC still wants to play match maker for someone who dosent deserve it. Im gonna continue reading but, I honestly dont even care much for for either couple at this point lol.

*long rant incoming lol*
Not that anybody asked

First off I wanna say I like the story and it had great potential. The art is really good and it has a great plot. HOWEVER, the story was wayyyy to short and it feels unfinished. We dont get any closure with the MC and his asshole father. We also dont get to see the evil sunbae's life fall to pieces from what he did. Another thing I dont like, is how the MC dosent have a freaking back bone lol. He just allows a stranger to come and "protect" him because his father says so. And the ML is just a complete asshole who just pushes him around and plays dumb ass mind games all the time. Not to mention the ML is a gangster who works directly under the MC's father, who the MC has been trying not to associate himself with for his entire life.... It rly dosent make that much sense lol. Dont even get me started on the bum ass side story. Like i get the're not gonna be lovey dovey but, I feel like that scene would have been recieved better if it wasent their first time together, or you know, if the ML wasent being all rapey

Warning, this is about to be a long ass rant lol

This story, to say the least, was literal ass. You know when you're watching something horrible happen, but you just cant look away... thats what this is lol. And Of course this is the same person who wrote that creepy ass pufferfish/dolphin story...

Child abuse, rape, mental illness, these are very serious topics, and ive read other amazing stories that touch on these topics and handle them correctly... this is not one of those stories.

Everyone one in this story is fucked up and insane. The MC, the ML, the uncle , the uncles bf, the parents of the MC. Everyone, just crazy af. The ML literally needs to be put in a psyc ward forever... like for rest of his life lol. And the MC shouldent be far behind. because why are you constantly going back to a psyco kid that constantly rapes and harasses you???? Like i get its for the plot, but damn, make it make sense at least.

And then the ML randomly gets his legs cut off????? wtffff???

Chile anyways... I get that everything on this site is fiction BUT if you're going to write on serious topics like Child abuse, rape, mental illness and you want the characters to have a happy ending... don't make the character doing the abuse be apart of the happy ending.

1/5 stars

Absolute DOG SHIT! This story is about a naive boy (borderline retar*ed), who "falls in love" with a cruel evil crazy rapist. Yes I know this is fiction, but I literally have no clue how this is labeled as "romance" and a "must read". its literally just sexual assault and a abusive power dynamic. the mc is so naive to the point where you may think he actually has a mental disability or has the mental capacity of an ACTUAL CHILD. either way this story is horrible, and im so confused how this story has and 8.8 lol .Yall need to stop hyping dumb shit like this up so we can get actual angst stories and not weird bs like this