This was definitely bittersweet.
In a way the ending was happy, but it still left me wanting to cry.
I just wish there was more...
Someone else's comment made me realize how I wished this story had ended...
1st, Yuu gets sick of Chiharu treating him like crap and runs away
2nd, Chiharu chases after Yuu demanding he return
3rd, Chiharu is hit by a bus while trying to drag Yuu back to the cafe
4th, having watched Chiharu get run over by a bus, Yuu has to give a statement to the police
5th, the police officer taking Yuu's statement is ridiculously hot and very gay
6th, the officer and Yuu fall madly in love and have AMAZING sex
7th, the officer treats Yuu like gold and they live happily ever after
8th, occasionally Yuu and his hot cop boyfriend visit Chiharu's grave to thank him for getting hit by a bus, so that they could be together
Now THAT would be a happy ending
Hahaha wow great imagination you have there. But actually not bad at all, I think that would make a better ending!! XD and I think it would make everyone here VERY HAPPY!!
Hit by a bus is a common solution to disappear disliked characters in yaoi for some readers. Pretty dramatic! I enjoyed pretty much this story, but it's a interesting plot indeed.
Omg hahahahahaha
I like more your version xD !!
I dropped the story after chapter 3 or 4 ouut of disgust and now I'll just imagine this was actually the case and be happy again :3
I enjoyed this, but it was seriously trippy.
It was basically an unholy union between pokemon and yaoi.
LMAO(≧∀≦)
Verde was already naked and willing, so just lock the puppy in the bathroom and get on with it!
At this point they need to list the Loup Garou werewolf puppy on Craig's list or something.
Once they sell it, they can use the money to pay for a love hotel...
That would be a Win-Win!
Chiharu keeps saying he's sorry and he loves Yuu, but so far all he's done is boss him around, impose himself on Yuu, and ignore virtually everything Yuu says.
Sorry, but when you throw in the fact that he raped Yuu so violently the poor guy ended up in the hospital, not mention that Chiharu keeps bringing up the fact the Yuu made a move on him 1st, like somehow that makes the rape Yuu's fault, I see absolutely no reason Yuu would ever want to forgive Chiharu, let alone date him.
Totally.
You know, I have a very simple solution to you...stop reading this. Because as far things are going, BANG they'll have sex and BANG they're going to end together and BANG lovey dovey as ever. As you see "absolutely no reason Yuu would ever want to forgive Chiharu, let alone date him." then what's the point to keep reading?....right??? ╮(￣▽￣)╭
As far as I'm concerned, the comments are so EVERYONE can voice their opinions, not just the people who love the story. If all anyone ever did was write about how great they thought stuff was, it would be both pointless and boring.
And FYI, some people don't only read things they know they are going to like. Some of us are actually willing to read a broad array of stories, including ones with subject matter we might find objectionable.
So here's my suggestion for you...
If you find the perspectives of people who disagree with you so objectionable that you feel compelled to go out of your way to attack them, then why don't you just not read the comments?
That way you won't be exposed to viewpoints that don't gel with your narrow way of looking at things, since that is obviously something you are too sensitive to handle.
It's funny that you say I have a narrow way of looking at things, if that was true, then I wouldn't be here in the first place, reading yaoi ffs! Dude I'm not attacking you so chill. Yes, everyone can make a comment either if they like the story or not, but your comment in particular caught my attention because it seems that you're definitely not enjoying it and not giving it a chance, so for me it doesn't make any sense just keep reading something you dislike just for the simple reason to argue till the end that you don't like it, that fictional characters are acting wrong and not according to your logic and etc, etc, etc.
But hey, who am I to tell people how to get fun? Be my guest if you like to hate things just for the fun of question everything, in yaoi probably you'll never get bored! (๑•ㅂ•)و✧
1st, I'm not a "dude". (Seriously, how many men named "Belle" do you know?)
2nd, you got caught trying to play the role of thought police, so just own up to it.
3rd, obviously I'm not the only person who wanted to comment on Chiharu's less than gentlemanly behavior, as evidenced by other comments and my upvotes.
4th, I don't "hate things for fun", but it sure seems like you do...
Just FYI, most people hate when individuals like you go out of their way to needless condescend to others.
So instead of attacking me, which is absolutely what you did and continue to do, you might want to reflect on why it is you feel the need to try to tell complete strangers how they should and should not respond to stories and characters.
The uke has some blame in this too.. he blantly leads on the seme. He tries to force himself on the guy even after he said no to him. Like? They both fucked up in their own ways, it wasn't just the seme. I honestly think they just need some communication skills if they want to seriously be together.
I'm genuinely curious, when do you feel Yuu lead Chiharu on?
I remember many instances of Yuu tell Chiharu he wants him gone, but not too many that would count as leading him on, so I'm curious about what examples you're thinking of.
Even if it was just once or twice... it's still wrong. Just like how the seme raped the uke "just once". Both are equally wrong. I assumed you've read the manga up to date right? The uke has already forced a blow job on the seme twice... that is what you call molestation. Which is not any better from being raped. Both are as equally wrong.
Yes, I have read the manga to date, but I didn't feel Yuu forced himself on Chiharu.
If I remember correctly, he stopped both times; once because Chiharu tried to turn the encounter into sex and once because Chiharu rejected him, which included slapping Yuu.
The reason I asked you originally why you felt Yuu had led him on was because it seemed like we interpreted the story very differently. For me, Chiharu comes across as violent and domineering, but Yuu doesn't at all.
Even when Yuu's tried to perform oral sex on Chiharu, I saw him doing it in an effort to put Chiharu in the same category as all the other nameless faceless men he didn't care about.
You missed the point... Chiharu told Yuu no. No matter what, no means no. Yet he did it a second time? How do you not see the not being wrong? If I told someone to stop and they didn't, I would be quite pissed off too.
There is no need to be nasty.
I didn't "miss the point".
I simply don't agree with you.
And as far ignoring the word "no", Chiharu is by far and a way the greater offender.
I'm not disagreeing with that at all. But just cause the seme did more, doesn't make the uke's wrongs right all of a sudden.
I kind of wanted him to get his powers back once they made love.
It would have been kind of like a reward for finally admitting how much they cared about each other.
ikr!! like everything becomes glowey and sparkly and woooshhhh powers returned. and mpreg would have been nice too
yup yup mpreg will be best ending for me hahaha
Yeah, but if he got his powers back then he would be the successor and have to marry a doe and have babies...
That would have been an interesting catch-22 - By proving he was in love he would automatically prevent himself from being with the man he loved...
Or he would have to convince everyone that being with a man didn't mean he couldn't be the successor.
That or he'd have to figure out how to have a baby, despite being with a man...
Maybe he could be the first deer man to use a surrogate.
I'm so excited to read this, but I'm also hoping this author with come out with lots more stories, including one for Asoda-san.
I know this isn't a comedy, but every time I read the name "Dick" I can't help giggling. The idea that they would name the main guy in a gay story "Dick" just strikes me as super silly.
Maybe the author wanted to make the American setting feel more authentic, since Dick is an American nickname for Richard.
English nickname*
Possible, but it's hard to believe they didn't know it's also a nickname for the penis.
Besides, most of the Richards I know go by Rick or Rich for that very reason.
He's gay. He likes dicks, so why not name him 'Dick.'
Seems to me if Minori decides to hook-up with his old boyfriend and to be faithful to him, it could negatively affect his practice.
I mean, if he's not allowed to give handjobs, do anal massage, or have sex with his patients, won't they be really, really disappointed?
Although, he won't have to spend so much time and bleach cleaning up all that semen, so that'll be a plus.
tbh this is one thing im really confused about.I wonder if Mitori still has sex with his customers even when he's together with Souta.Can u help me out?