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Well then...In the her initial childhood phase it was an ok story with potential but when it time skipped 5 yrs all of a sudden it became very VERY cringe worthy Mary Gary Su esq with all the clichés attached, many plot hole & character brain holes & the stereotypical low IQ villains....I gotta say I was not expecting the story to go in such a.....cliche direction...I'm speechless Σ( ￣□￣||) I guess read if you like bad cliches...

NGL romance wise I'm def team Fay, that man can clean, cook, fight & is handsome... any man that can chef it up in the kitchen is husband material fr.(▰˘◡˘▰)

Also that house irene ...iranese(house of gold) what ever it was called is very territorial of their bloodline n keeping it as.... "Pure" as possible ....Realistically just like in many irl noble & royal family's of the past I'm guessing there might be some heavy incest going on in that family....yikes (￣∇￣")

At first I thought this was the usual Gary su MC that has a sad past trauma blah blah blah but reading further in & what I made out from the translations is MC & ML are both toxic... SPOILERS:







The ML:
ML takes advantage r@pes MC while MC himself is drunk & in heat, (a drunk person cannot give consent) ML thought it was ok cuz MC was saying he wanted it but clearly he wasn't in his right mind. ML always blames MC after he r@pes him saying some ish like 'you asked for it.' when MC asked him many times to stop. He(ML) is also quick to anger when another male approaches MC even if it was MC that was in the wrong. ML is your usual smut protagonist lacking in common sense & morals.

The MC:
MC like I said before I thought at first he was your typical Gary su tragic past character trying to make a new life for himself but he just like ML has NO common sense whatsoever. Completely negative IQ... He constantly puts himself in bad situations where he becomes a victim. Instead of taking the necessary precautions for his gender he ignores all advice & logic & brainlessly goes without prep & defense(inhibitor & a taser or somethin) Thats like if I knew my period was coming soon but instead of buying tampons I decided to walk around anyways & then act surprised when suddenly there's a blood spot leaking through my pants....like bro...you know what type of person ML is & yet YOU keep approaching him.
Its weird how he seems to know next to nothing about his own gender especially since this is based in a modern setting so sex ed is the norm in school.
He did the same bs with his scumbag EX. MCs Ex did all types of messed up sht to MC & even when the EX asked MC to basically let his friends fk him instead of fighting back n saying no he lets it happen...where I come from thats called pimping. I know there really are people who fall for guys like tht & bend to their whims out of mental manipulation n what not but this aint the same, MC DELIBRATELY goes into these situations knowing what's more than most likely gonna happen. Despite all the BS & MC being fully aware that he "hates" how they are treating him & acts like he doesn't give a damn about said persons he will still stay, like he wants the drama ....

This kind of pushover victimizing behavior really grinds my gears. Its like MC does everything in his power to keep making himself a victim in every kind of situation whether its an argument or something sexual.

In conclusion MC & ML are both red flags all round & MC seems to intentionally make everything harder for himself & surrounds himself with red flags (not the side characters just other males tht end up with an interest in MC or ML.) So this is basically another brainless Omegaverse smut read. Man its hard finding an omegaverse that doesn't gender discriminate like its the 1700s irl & actually has a main couple with a healthy relationship. Σ(っ°Д °;)っ

This couple was very cute! & for once in a blue moon it was a relationship that was very healthy. Tbh I totally thought they were gonna be Switches/Seke unfortunately it wasn't, Seke MLs are so rare I've only ever read 2 manga/novels where the MCs were switches. ┗( T﹏T )┛I'm giving this one 4 out of 5 stars, -1 star cuz like others said 'the side stories just are not enough.' :(

Yikes the other commentors were right, The MC is very low IQ/EQ & has a huge inferiority complex when he meets other beautiful people with his master. He seriously fails to communicate with people especially ML so there ends up being so many bs misunderstandings that could be cleared up easily instead they are left to fester. ML also has communication problems & the way he treats MC is ...very questionable, I know he is the demonic sect leader & traditionally in most "evil" or demonic sects in any novel/manga they obviously do not follow the same morals that righteous sect individuals do. In regular sects your master is seen as basically a second father/mother & in exchange they raise the disciples like their own kids so if you were to engage in sexual relations it would be seen as incest/blasphemous relationship. The ML seemed to say he wanted to raise MC as a real normal disciple but then the moment he thinks MC has feelings for someone else he immediately loses it. He basically raised MC as a BF....As for their child...I have not gotten that far but the comments I am seeing talking about him......YIKES BRUHDDA(￣∇￣") ...

Conclusion: If you read don't take the story to heart...its a pretty sh*t plot with 1 dimensional character wth flat personality's, I would say I prob just read as long as I did for the smut but even that wasn't really good. ┑(￣Д ￣)┍

Edit: I read the side storys....wow.... SPOILERS......





MC really just helped his son give a date rape drug to tht poor guy, instead of asking him out n just confessing bro opted for force instead...I didn't think MC would do something so low as to causing a similar situation having gone through the pain tht ML put him through. Instead of wishing a more healthy start to his kids relationship its like he wants his kids partner to be in an unhealthy relationship too, some "If I suffered then everyone will suffer" nonsense. One of those parents tht can't stand to see their child succeed where they couldn't & wants to send them down the same bloody road.

n again with the lack of communication MCs son doesn't know tht ML originally tried to abort him too & because he doesn't know that he has a similar mindset as the ML. "The whole I would never let my lover die or give birth to a child that could harm them" & never actually asking for the opinion of you know....the one actually carrying the child.Σ( ￣□￣||) MCs kids personality is a mix of all the bad traits of ML & MC with a bit of your cliche Cold scumbag low EQ ML type. ML is such a hypocrite to, he said himself 'Lies only lead to more lies' & then look he goes & constantly lies to MC & his kid.(●￣(ｴ)￣●)

1st chap in...So basically...instead of leaving those scumbags who looked down on him cuz he was previously thought a beta...he stays with them?! Are you kidding me! Bro gets reborn & the first thing that comes out of the scum MLs mouth is "I'm the only 1 that would accept you." BIH WTF but then changes his face instantly when he gets a whiff of MCs new omega pheromones...& MC just lets him fk em??? Aight .... I'm guessing this is brainless smut with brainless plot

Still one of my fav romance manga ლ(´ڡ`ლ)

My guy really used a wooden dildo (⊙…⊙ ), I know in actual history they made wooden & stone dildo's ...but his wooden one looked like it didnt have any type of protective coating on it....bruuuuh I cant even imagine the slivers one would get down there （/TДT)/

I know its brainless smut but....the plot is literally MC being a BIG ho & a r@pist LMAO

I love the main couple but the side couple...doc & MCs bro....I just can't really get into it...the doc puts me off...hes pretty annoying & inserts his opinions where they r not needed, he also divulges MCs medical info at the drop of a hat ...which is def immoral. overal he just comes off as a negative toxic person, literally reminds me of a Fuckboy playing with the feelings of someone who's quick to blush n get embarrassed. He def took advantage of MCs bro...MCs bro deserves better. ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ