Hmm I don't think I like this. Its both well written...and sort of not at the same time? All of them are changing their tune far too quickly I think, and its painful to have to read her being so subservient and begging for forgiveness all the time. I get that she's terrified of dying, but it still feels like she's not showing enough frustration/inner animosity to these people.
And she's getting (emotionally) touched far too easily, these people have emotionally abused and bullied her for the last 6 years, she should be way more wary of their sudden change...
Its so weird, some parts of it are genuinely tragic and moving to read, and the characters are interesting, but their affection is going up way too much.
Im disappointed, this looked pretty good and had good art...
Lord almighty, can yall at least keep consistent names translators?? The stuff about their names being greek mythology ect references makes sense but 1) Medea is the more common spelling (a nit pick but seriously), 2) how u gonna correct every other name but suddenly make Heli into Halley????
At this point i don't care anymore, just pls be consistent...
I get the gist of the plot but at times I'm lost about some things the characters say. Their will either be a typo or an out of character comment, or even the names of the characters will change? Is it Neil or Nilla?
In the 5th chapter, the mc is predictably announced to have won the contest, but she's like "No!!! my prediction has never been wrong before..." ??? girl?? isn't this what u were expecting/aiming for?? whats going on








I like the smut and I cant believe I'm saying this as a smut fan, but I actually want to get back to the plot
I also somewhat feel suspicious of the bf, I reckon he's in the same line of work or is straight up the enemy or third party.
The smut is actually kind of part of the plot. In this case. It’s Jeurgen’s interrogation technique of choice when it comes to his Cute Little Cinnamon Roll!