
Like, seriuosly? This has all the clichés of yaoi.
I mean yeah, someone was going to rape me, I call out my friend and he rapes me too 'cause hey, idk
Awesome plot, incredible, O R I G I N A L guys.
That logic in sequences and characters, ufff 10/10
I'd rather laugh than cry for how bad was just this 1st chapter, sorry

He's such a jerk lmao HAHAHA
Not the typical angelical character we deal with. But I would like to see why is he like that. Not having an explanation for that personality would make me bored.
Also, at some point, he's also relatable. Like, all the bad shit I want to do ir say sometimes he just does It lmao.
What.
Ok so you portray rape as something serious first (that of course it is) but then idk it just feels so unrealistic and stupid. Like, why would you do that?
What is this, Wattpad?