oh this pacing and writing is ass
I agree. The fact that he calmed down so fast? The kiss while he's having a panic attack??? The fact that they're acting like hanging up is the solution to the problem when a real person would not buy that for a second???? Give me a break.
Chillllllll .. that was a temporary solution to calm him down. Heck, I thought it was smart to at least show how simple it is to avoid his mother. And it wasn't just a kiss. It also helped to regulate his breathing. It might've seemed fast if you read fast, but if you play it out in your mind in real time, it was fairly decent.
Calm down is a crazy response to someone sharing their opinion on writing. It wasn't well written and it wasn't realistic. Kissing someone who's having a panic attack is not normal human behavior lol
I kinda wanna guess your age hahahaha
Yeah? And I was being realistic here. Although, no, a normal person wouldn't kiss a person to stop panic attack. But come on.... It's YAOI. You can't always be realistic. (But watch the short bl anime called Hyperventilation. It speculates on that specifically.) So there is some realistic reasoning here.
And sure. Share your opinion. I was only suggesting something to help make it more enjoyable for you. But you're basically a Debbie downer. Good luck with that attitude.
I'm done now.
Go ahead. Nobody has got it right, yet.
Girl idk why you're so pressed
I think it's fun AND important to critique every piece of media you consume.
True true. It may have been my misperception. I apologize if I offended you.
anyone has recos for similar short form fluffs?
19 Days!!!
I love themmm !!!
y'all there was a lengthy yaoi series with similarly drawn characters and time period to this can anyone help me find it again please
Is it Momo To Manji? I literally thought this was that one when I saw it on the home page
YESS OMG THANK YOU !!!!
I'm physically and mentally imploding
SHIT I ACCIDENTALLY DOWNVOTED IM SO SORRY
y'all this is the bratty top/bottom yall have been wanting now.....