
Raise the discipline-lover but with a vampire and mpreg spin to it
People are calling him a groomer to which I kinda see it and agree is awkward and something that should never happen irl but I'm gonna try and not think of it that way because that's literally every vampire teen romance ever I don't remember people calling Edward a groomer

Here let me fix it
After a few weeks into their marriage he gets interested in her confesses but she's a little awkward about doing the did, at least until she sees him in lingerie and they develop a kink and maybe she even pegs him sometimes
Instead what we got was a sick fucker who got his side of the deal but didn't respect her boundaries she didn't want to have sex but still this shitty asshole went and raped her while she was unconscious multiple times, he even went so far as drugging her

I like the plot so far but his piercing placement is weird? Like shouldn't it be centered if it's in the middle of the lip usually side piercings are slightly under the lip or rings? Also the artwork is very flat and the piercing looks over rendered almost if not 3d?
It's weird but it's bugging m it's the artist in me nitpicking
The way the drama keeps scaling up is hilarious