Ok I just want to say this. Absolutely loved the story.
So I may be biased when saying that them ending monologue didn't ruin it for me. At first, I had mixed feelings about it 'cuz I wanted it to be wholesome and purehearted but when I thought about it, it actually fits. We know how goal-driven Raymond is throughout the whole story, he always had that obsessive quality where he goes over and beyond. The storytelling actually make sense (to me tho) why he got that possessiveness to Ian, especially now that he redirected his goal into loving Ian and deems it more important than anything. I don't really agree that he's lying to Ian like how he thinks he is, it's just that Ian isn't aware of how deep Raymond feeling are towards him and Raymond is afraid to scare him.
But that's just how I see it. I actually find it sweet that he says "You'll never find out" because that's like he would keep trying to keep himself under control like a good hubby. Or am I taking things out of context? Lmaooo
Well that was my tedtalk... Now let me cry because one of my fav bl just ended ( T﹏T )┛
It's so CUTEEE so I don't know why I'm nitpicking gosh( ̄∇ ̄"). Might be because I'm bitter lmaoo
I almost laughed at the contract part 'cause it was like straight outta wattpad or something XD. But honestly, the part where she got all sad about the guy not saying "I like you" was kinda a turn off. I mean they agreed it was just a "test" and not an actual relationship.
So far it honestly is cute and the art is to die for. Like I said, maybe I'm just nitpicking cuz I'm bitter. Wink wink(/TДT)/











Omg that smile at the end. If only he wasn't a real bad guy, I would've rooted for him 100%