I... What the hell. Bro got casually assaulted, forced into marriage and bit all in one chapter wtf lmao???
He also managed to slip and fall onto the ml's d!ck im crying what is this story
I didnt expect the quick exchange of i love yous LOL
Reading through the comments has me cackling cause I also hateeeee how dumb they made the uke like. But I want to see the baby so imma power through.
This is giving 90s shoujo core but instead of a petite bug eyed girl, its a buff bearded omega bottom HAHAHA
It was alright for what its worth, I hope they patch up a lot of the loopholes in the aude stories at least. Super rushed ending :'l
And low-key, im more proud of the development from gargoyle claws to normal looking nails LOLLLLL pls I couldn't even take it seriously ahahaha
Had better potential frfr
Bruh we kinda lost the strength of the plot in the middle. The ml isn't even a problem tbh it was the mc becoming op all of a sudden LOLLL. Fym you became powerful af after the ogfl gave you some heirloom when she doesnt even know tf is actually happening. How convenient lolol. The conclusion of the plot was weak
Its good for a one time read. The mls were hot. I like Dan but Eugene was a better ml tbh. Or even Kain. Augh.
I feel like it woupdv3 been an actual masterpiece if it had more chapters and had fleshed out the backstories and even the general events better than just brushing over it within 4-5 panels. Like I want my heart to clench and hurt more you feel me? I wanna SOB. This had the potential frfr. But the read was good. Matsumoto the mvp lol
Literally my exact thoughts. I love this work, I come read it from time to time, I think is great and it will always have a special place in my heart but in this last re-read I just couldn't help but notice it needed more chapters to flesh things out properly, specially with the interesting premise and setting and how nice the author created the ambience of the story (dk if I make sense). Like, common you had all the story beats for absolute great angst, you even have a massive national disaster -that honestly we don't see much in bls and the event actually happen in real life- and have them separate for five years, show me the life trought out those years, show me the pain, the struggle, the longing, MAKE ME HUUUURT, MAKE ME HURT BIG TIME
EXACTLYYYYYYYY LIKE GET ME MORE ATTACHED TO THEM SO I CAN FEEL THE HEARTBREAK AND CRY LIKE A TON YKWIM. THE POTENTIAL IT HAS TO BE HEART WRENCHING PIECE OF ART HAS ME PUNCHING THE AIR
HAVE I STUMBLED UPON PURE GOLD??? IM ONLY 4 CHS IN AND I ALREADY LOVE IT WAHAHAH