
i will just turn off my brain for this one, because it's clearly written for the smut and not for a pretty love story. i also see a lot of people talking about rape. yeah, kinda meh i guess. authors need to be more creative if they want to get the two main characters to fuck on the first or second encounter without making it feel rushed or blatantly forced. "drunk bottom looks sexy and irresistible" is such a tired trope.

do they really want me to think that prick of an best friend wasn't being possessive and judgmental af, he used the uke from youth until present self for his own ego he can die also the random assault out of jealousy is boring, unnecessary and unrealistic Σ(っ°Д °;)っ
the seme was freeloading and not considering his former partners feelings as he never expected to be loved in the first place so when he finally started developing feelings he noticed how he acted superficial to the point of seeming totally numb to reality, i guess there really are people like this out there but i wish there were a better redemption arc
as everything was rushed, i guess this was as best as it could be (〜 ̄△ ̄)〜

i prefer the bald old man as the sponsor he looks like the eccentric type and it makes it funny (if it's possible) to enjoy his scenes, i feel like a tall straight faced well kept sponsor can send shivers down my spine and it would be unbearable because guys with suits really look like unstable psychopaths, not just perverted beyond repair... and what the author wrote in the afterwords is right, this one was definitely not supposed to be widely popular, but it's gonna be a non-guilty guilty pleasure of mine since i'm weak to sick and twisted stories with realistic smelly and hairy middle aged men bodies because i can't actually take men in real life (i'm scared ╥﹏╥). the wife's little brother broke so easily in exposure to a hot and dirty old men being turned into an obedient whore like he gets me ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶
oooh i can't wait