
I’m DISAPPOINTED I didn’t get four full chapters of him getting fucked 7 ways to Sunday.
And two dicks like a snake.
And if not 4 full smut chapters AND OR two ducks for double penetration fun, then I’m disappointed that we just kinda gloss over the in heat. You can’t go “sometimes I had sex with one of the three or what felt like all three at once” as if you were telling me you had an odd dream of riding a roller coaster with a tiger, a elephant, and a dolphin. We deserved those scenes IN DETAIL. We were robbed! ROBBED I say!

Tbh, I’m disappointed there wasn’t a snake dick. I was expecting him to be fucked by two dicks and I only see one. So. Other than that disappointment though I’m curious how long it’s been since there’s a time skip it seems

Ok well actual snakes’ hemipenes aren’t covered in scales I don’t want to say you should go look it up cause irl kinda yuck, but their reproductive organ(s) are hidden within their cloaca and while reproducing they can extend one or both of their hemipenes to distribute sperm.
But in story purposes it would be a great way to checkmark double penetration without a second being there. And a grand way to have two personalities have at him at once

Noo my poor baby child! If he wants to switch he will stop trying to force it. You both like each other even though you don’t know that! Let the author take the wheel! just enjoy being his partner! Get down and dirty! Just kiss already and devour yourselves as soulmates!
…maybe I went a little overboard. But still. Slow burn your romance a little faster
As proud of him as I am for wanting to protect the child I feel this could have been better done in stealth mode without making ourselves the new hostage. Our ml is going to have an aneurysm.