I.....I just dont understand anything thats going on in this story and I dont know/cant remember who everyone is. I think Beelzebub is the Pink hair one, ut.thats all who I.know. I feel really stupid, but I'm glad it seems like I'm not the only one.....maybe?? Maybe I should go back and read from the start or maybe let this marinate and then come back and read it again. I don't know. *shrugs* I hate this bc the art is so pretty.
If anybody would like to explain to me what's going on, I would appreciate it.
Okay....soooo, I recognize that this was a wild one and fucked up on a few levels....BUT....I cant bring myself to hate it. *hides*
Why?
Because it reminds me of me. Reading this felt like a fanfiction I would have written years ago and then came across it today, while cleaning out my jump drive, and cringing as Im reading it, going, "The fuck was I thinking..?" Especially at the Seme during the sex scene. I hope I'm a better writer now, compared to then.
Anybody see in Chapter 2, at the beginning-middle part when they're toddlers or 5y/o or whatever, Darion is kissing Gill's forehead while balancing on the very tips of his toes? Lol. I don't know whether to be impressed or find it adorable....or both.
Yall....please tell me I'm not the only one who burst into a fit of gleeful giggles when Taemoon, who was posted up on his knees, naked as all get out, and waving his fists back and forth like a toddler during a temper tantrum, started yelling, "I DIDNT SQUIRT!!"
And please tell me I'm not the only one imagining Seonwoo looking at Taemoon with that, "You like Krabby Patties, dontcha' Squidward?" look on his face. lmaoooo
I got excited....all for me to get let down bc there's no new chapter. Not even a PH.
And here I thought my mental illness fucked me up in the head, but naaaah. After reading the Boss's story, I came to the conclusion that the Author's got me beat. Which leads me to this question: Is the author okay? And there's an editor somewhere that OK'd these side stories. Are they okay too? Do we need to check up on them? Make sure they are (mentally) stable and that "all their lights are on upstairs", if you know what I mean.
Just read the Het. Story Nellie's Secret Garden and it was straight trash. That Author needs to take pointers from this Author so they can know how it's (a PWPBWAAP aka Plot-what-plot-but-with-an-actual-plot) really supposed to be done.
Is it just me or is this a literal porn movie...just drawn? It's not even a PWP kinda story. It's something you'd find on pornhub or faphouse. And we already know the acting is as horrendous as what's written here.
There's an author that actually sat down and wrote this and an editor that read this and said, "YES, let's publish this!" So....are they okay? Anybody checked up on them? Maybe a Wellfare Check or something?
So, he didn't make her an honest woman in the end? Even during that time, it would've been okay for them to wait a couple of years after the husband's death and then get married. Marriage between In-Laws happened all the time, at least to keep the family name.
So, the Author did a cop-out, yeah? They killed the FL at the end. Bc their brain was probably rotten by this point so, they killed her and then him and ended the story.
Did she really say/think this??? "My world is shaking....my lips....my nipples...my clitoris..." Uh, DUH ya ditz. Ya gotta whole ass diamond ring randomly stuck to your clit that apparently vibrates controlled by his ring.
For real tho....how did it stay around her clit?? Again magic? Really wish the Author could've explained that or whatever. The damn thing was just....there....STUCK. Flies don't even stick to shit tighter than that ring stuck to her clit.
Anyway....I had a good laugh tho.
I HAVE QUESTIONS.
The ring took me out--I couldnt concentrate on the story. Swear, after that, the rest of the chapters had me thinking, "How tf did that ring stay on her clit??" If it's magic, then.....then is that how it stays?
And how did she squirt on the first try? He just tongued her too. Didn't stick it at all, yet she squirted her ass, er, pussy off.
And why am I even reading this?
I guess I'm not as mad at Nagi as everybody else. Yes, he outed Makoto, BUT...if Makoto forgave him and or made up with him, then I guess I'm good too. I normally hold grudges and get pissed at the smallest of things but for some reason, I can't stay mad at Nagi. And if he's liked Makoto for a long time, yall really can't expect him to just move on like *snaps* that just bc Makoto has Shiro. I bet my left nipple some'a y'all right now are still liking your married/engaged/etc. crush. As long as Nagi doesn't cross the line, you know? Redeem yourself, Nagi, by not crossing the line. You don't have to like Shiro, but respect Makoto's choice.
Haven't read this. Well, I read the first chapter and something immediately told me to wait until it's completed--no matter how long it takes. But I'm curious...do we see MC commit suicide? Is it in an actual chapter or is it just implied through flashbacks and MC's nightmares?
(1) I hope Silver Fox Dad comes in peace. Don't need his ass messing with our boys and baby girl and fucking shit up for them. These two are one of the couples I've become protective over and would stand and die on a hill, shit even a mountain, for.
(2) Season 2 Finale??? FINALE?? Didn't we just come back from hiatus from the Season 1 Finale?? Or is it one of those situations where when what you're reading/watching is so good that you don't notice the chapters/minutes flying by and BAM you're at the end?? Is that what I'm experiencing?? Siiiiighs. Okay. I have no choice but to wait for Season 3, but DAMN. I've finished a couple of manhwas and a webtoon and a manga today. I hate when some of them line up to end or go on hiatuses at the same time.
(3) Wait....lol 2 seasons and our baby girl still has no name? Lol! We should call her Squishy and she shall be ours and she shall be our Squishy. Come on, Squishy. Come on, little Squishy! Lmaoo
(4) Anybody got any wholesome Yaoi/Bl webtoons or manhwas recs like this one?
(Geez, didn't realize how long this was until I posted. Sorry guys!)
TLDR: Bittersweet that it ended. I'll miss them. Wished it was more condensed so that we could've gotten side stories of Caesar's and Lee Won's childhoods. Love the story anyway. Loved interacting with you guys and hopefully we'll see each other around!
I was ready for this to end, yet now that it has, I'm missing Lee Won and Caesar already. Especially Lee Won. God, he's a beautiful, beautiful man. I'm glad they finally had a normal romantic moment. Of course, we'd get it on the very last chapter of the freaking side stories lolol. Tbh, after seeing Sasha--Caesar's Dad, knowing what Caesar has been through as a child, and now hearing about his mother, I kinda want a story of his childhood up to mid adulthood maybe, along with Lomonosov and Sasha as men (younger men), with Lee Won and his mother's life back in Korea. Maybe like a short webtoon or something. Maybe one season.
I was thinking, some of the story and the side stories could've been cut and condensed together as one webtoon or manhwa or whatever. This chapter could've been the last chapter for the main story and the SS could've been what I was talking about above, on up to when Lee Won first made it to Russia and, end when he bumped into Caesar for the first time.
Anyhoo, I love the story anyway.
And we can all agree that this was a roller coaster, right guys? We'll all probably see each other around on other stories here, but still let me say that I've had fun reading this and then coming here to the comments reading and interacting with you all. This story brought a fun bunch. I'll be seeing you guys around!
I agree with a lotta you. The plot (plotwhatplot) was rushed but I meant.....for a short story like this? Fine. It is what it is. Besides, sometimes I do like quickies. Especially when they're fluffy and sexy like this one. I do have to say that this last chapter? Is the reason why there are times where I wish I could press a Play Button and watch the scene unfold ................*ahem*.............................Yep. As in I wanna watch them bang. ANYWAY. It was a nice reason. Not great. Not bad, either. Just nice.
Haven’t read this yet. I’ll wait for more chapters and then it has a low rating, which kinda tells me what I need to know about this story, BUT I’ve been wrong before (which is why I don’t read something based entirely on ratings).
Anyway, I saw a few comments about Chapter 10 and decided to check it out. Geez Louise! Reading it was like a fever dream! It was like one of those dreams where you run away from something and go through a door to get away, only to be brought back to where you were originally/what you’re running away from. And no matter how many doors you pick and go through, you find yourself back in that same spot.
Yeah…..lmao. That’s what Chapter 10 was like. I ended up giving up after it brought me back to the beginning of the chapter (if you’ve read it, you know what I mean. If you haven’t read it, pleeease. It’s a doozy!).
I’m with everyone on this one: the rapists should’ve gotten their comeuppance. I’m sure like y’all, I’ve read tons of ABO stories. My favs are when the Omegas are treated normally and are not being abused and raped. It sucks that there aren’t that many stories. I just hate that it’s like a trend that Authors make Omegas so lowly in society that they’re abused, spat upon, they can’t get decent jobs, and there’s always Alphas that think if they’re swayed by the scent or heat of an Omega, it’s the OMEGA’S fault and if they were to be raped or abused, they “wanted” that Alpha to rape them.
It makes me sad bc if something like “second genders” were to ever happen, in this world, Omegas would be treated like shit….just like in these stories. And on the other side of that, there would be Omegas that would purposely seduce Alphas and trap them. Our society, where we are now, wouldn’t be able to handle something like ABO Second Genders. Hell, we can’t even get rid of racism, sexism, homophobia, and etc., so having Second Genders would be a no-go. We’d quickly find out just how big pieces of shit a lot of us are as a society.
Sorry. Didn’t mean to be gloomy and deep. This story just pressed on a nerve for me.
Sooo.....with this kinda story, I feel like it should be longer, ya know? There's certain things that should've been covered and expounded upon with the type of content this story had.
Also, the Manager or Director or whatever she was....I didnt like her opinions on Jin. "He's a monster!" Oh...bc he's a literal porn actor, who didn't want children and the porn actress he was fucking for work, caught feelings, which was against the rules, and punctured holes into their condoms and got pregnant, and had the nerve to get pissed when Jin told her to get rid of it?? So he's the monster, but the bitch who punched holes into the condom to get pregnant on purpose and essentially trapped the man into parenthood...what is she then??? Yeah, that Manager/Director/Whatever bitch, I wanted to punch every time I saw her after she said that shit.
So, I'm wondering something. I didn't know if I would like the whole amnesia and break-up SL. I thought it was a cop-out, as far as them having a happy relationship goes. But I think it grew on me, the more I read this so, with that being said, does anybody have any Recs for "Break-up to Make up" stories? Yaoi/BL/Shonen Ai please. I have a few bookmarked already, but I figured I should ask anyway to see if you guys got any suggestions. Let me know! <3 <3
I dont know if anyone has said anything about this---it aggravates me every time I see it--her bracelet is entirely too large for her little wrist. Every time I see it, I think, "It's gonna fall off!" She wears it bc Zepon bought it for her. I get it, but the artist or editor or somebody should've recognized that it was too large and resized it. It takes me out of the SL Every time I see it. Maybe it's meant to be exaggerated. I mean, the hair is exaggeratedly long, whether it's up or down. Maybe the bracelet is to be the same: exaggerated. But you can't tell me she wears it comfortably bc there's no way it stays on her wrist.
As much as it tickles me the shenanigans Det. Gang finds himself in, I really want him with that Cutie Patootie Oh.
And....if this is his niche...meaning this is how he catches his criminals, his career as a Detective won't be long. His ass won't hold up at the rate he's going. Can you imagine 50 year old Gang doing this?
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Silver Fox sex? Nevermind!! Continue Gang, for as long as you want!