Grey Goo May 9, 2024 12:16 pm

He was really about to start scolding MC and defending his mother before she cut him off? Alright, throw the whole man away. She deserves a divorce and 50% assets NOW, no cheating required.

Grey Goo May 9, 2024 2:06 am

What the heck is a technician?

Grey Goo May 8, 2024 8:22 pm

Everything the MC dreams about happened to the previous hero, like really happened and only Argio remembers the previous life, or even lives, or maybe they all do and are hiding it from this hero bc they screwed up the previous one so much.

Grey Goo May 8, 2024 3:01 pm

And it was so nonchalant! Why even include the attempted rape if it’s not going to have an impact on the story past a few panels! No doubt if they were so comfortable drugging and raping a friend, they’ve definitely done it to other people. Just ew. I don’t like saying this, but this story is really giving me the ick with its writing.

Grey Goo May 8, 2024 2:50 pm

But the MC really is just that dumb. He has no brain and no spine. Pretty sure you could replace him with a lamp for all the personality and agency he has. Does MC hate his sister? Is that why he’s okay with setting up a meeting between her and a rapist? Instead of telling said rapist to fuck off? Did he even tell his sister what the guy did to him or did he really just let her spend time in a foreign country with a terrible man just because he feels insecure?

Grey Goo May 8, 2024 1:25 pm

Seme is already a red flag, he was really not going to intervene when someone was about to get raped until the guide thing happened. Though with how basic this writing already is, the author is probably going to brush that aside and it will never be brought up again.

    belsefar May 25, 2024 12:33 am

    Makes it worse that it’s pretty clear that uke is naive. With these pos seme’s the only ones who can handle them are jaded-type ukes. Watching the naive ones get broken down by them makes me feel like a masochist.

    Loner May 28, 2024 2:53 pm

    The seme will be much worse later. Until chap 15 maybe he start to be more conscious of mc.

    Hidvi July 6, 2024 5:46 pm
    The seme will be much worse later. Until chap 15 maybe he start to be more conscious of mc. Loner

    Where did you read it

Grey Goo May 7, 2024 8:35 pm

The way the seme is currently makes this unreadable for me, he’s just awful to the uke because he has power over him. No feelings, just pure ego. Not rooting for them to get together at all. I’ll be back if and only if there’s a groveling arc. But it’s doubtful.

    asmiir_ May 7, 2024 10:26 pm

    He’ll get a rude awakening with the brother openly hurting Yigon and then we’ll see the arc but if there isn’t any apology?! I’m gonna be so heated

    Ichigo May 8, 2024 12:05 am

    right. I honestly don't even give a fck about nor do I want a groveling arc or whatever. He's just a horrible person and even if he "catches feelings" for mc at any point, that doesn't change the fact that what we're seeing now is his true nature. So fuck this bitch. I hope the crazy brother kills him instead

    Grey Goo May 8, 2024 1:00 am
    right. I honestly don't even give a fck about nor do I want a groveling arc or whatever. He's just a horrible person and even if he "catches feelings" for mc at any point, that doesn't change the fact that what... Ichigo

    The seme and brother killing each other in a crazy death battle over the uke might be the only true good ending

    Renkim May 8, 2024 1:47 am
    The seme and brother killing each other in a crazy death battle over the uke might be the only true good ending Grey Goo

    Ooohhh now that i wanna see

    RaspberryParfait May 8, 2024 3:40 pm
    The seme and brother killing each other in a crazy death battle over the uke might be the only true good ending Grey Goo

    Now youre cooking

    chuuwrld ✧ May 14, 2024 9:32 pm
    The seme and brother killing each other in a crazy death battle over the uke might be the only true good ending Grey Goo

    REAL

Grey Goo May 7, 2024 8:31 pm

Not often we get an unlikeable MC/FL that has a nasty personality, and not in an entertaining way, but in “Oh you’re just a shallow bitch” kind of way. Not interested in her character so dropping this.

Grey Goo May 7, 2024 12:14 pm

Whose first reaction to waking up in a place you staunchly refused to go, that you’re completely unfamiliar with, AND right after being assaulted, is to find a random bathroom and take a bath? And refuse to put your old clothes on, mind you this is after being assaulted by a random alpha and touched by the ML while you were vulnerable, so you would rather be mostly naked in this unfamiliar place… Sometimes the author writes the MC in an almost believable way when reacting to a situation, and then other times they have the MC’s brain freeze just for the purpose of fanservice. Bc that’s what the bath scene is. It will impact the story 0 going forward.

    Witchery May 11, 2024 8:22 am

    Baekwoo doesn’t have a real personality. He is written for the sole purpose of accommodating the prince’s toxic/controlling behavior without making him look bad (like if he was severely depressed and traumatized by being forced into marriage with a stranger solely because he is biologically likely to give their family powerful babies, all while being expected to give up all of his freedom, autonomy, and dreams to work as crown princess every day against his will, there would be no way that the prince would be anything other than a villain perpetrating this abuse)

Grey Goo May 7, 2024 12:06 pm

Why do authors STRUGGLE to write adult characters? This is a romance, not just BL, trope I’ve noticed. Where the only way the author knows how to write the adult MC falling for the ML (if MC is uke or woman) is by writing them with the mentality and critical thinking skills of a particularly dumb 15 year old. Like they’ll be 25+ years old but reacting to the ML’s advances, or any situation in general really, like they’re just hitting puberty. It’s so frustrating.

    Aurora_1010 May 7, 2024 2:42 pm

    Shutline, Wet Sand, and Under the Green Light will help reinvigorate your confidence in mature writing, if you haven't read them yet!

    Otherwise, I agree. Happy hunting~

    Ichigo May 7, 2024 4:50 pm

    I agree completely!!!

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