Drawings didn't bother me too much , ı saw the very very worst . maybe just some unnecesarry " terrifying " kind backgrounds :D
İt was cute :D
I read first 2 chapters but no more ı guess
No shounen ai but maybe bromance or hints at least.
Most of the panels had no background , it felt weird
Wowws Im really really excited about this now （/TДT)/
Just what part of actions haru did caused more scars then yours you annoying ashole !!!!??
Ikr? Oh boo hoo, you had to be nice to a little kid. Sob, someone was better than you in track. Cry me a river...loser.
lmaoo I totally agree!! all haru did was worship him a little too much, but that was pretty much it?? all he wanted was to be liked? how is Soudai going to blame Haru for his failures? he should take responsibility for his own stupid actions. no one told him to quit track. now, I just hope Soudai won't take advantage of Haru's love. but it seems that's where it's headed..
If someone copy you and they are better than you it will give scar in your heart...
Maybe its what we call pride
Haru never said he was better nor did the coach. He said Haru has talent and Sou took it upon himself to quit track and run away. Self esteem that is defined by another persons viewpoint is never healthy. Sou is childish and Haru is pitiable. As though overt hero worship is some kind of crime. What kind of pathetic pride is that?
I 100% agree with you!!! You said it perfectly. And the fact that Sou met up with him after all these years and is still harboring these unjustified feelings? What a childish and immature guy. Like get over yourself.
It makes me laugh and gives me creeps at the same time ... And ı must confess ı liked semes' gazes , they were hot and scary
Maybe machi saved him , instead of taking his life •^•
Its Michi and yes! I think so too~ ╥﹏╥
I didn't like the art
Well, the fingers and fingernails are a bit weird. It's distracting.
for me, the art is okay, and wold be better if they put extra effort in the tone and shade. tho, I can't really get much feelings from it.
I didt give an explination but these were my thougs :) drawings are light but you can't see the effort in shapes and as you said theres no tones , shades - nor percpective . ı cant read them like this , every panel seems very similar , boring
Oh just after ı was looking in galery and ı can see some pages with okey art , but ı lost my interest in the begining so ...
haha yea, I get you.
yeah the lines are too thin and are barely there.. tho it does make it seem more sad somehow n makes the uke look like he'll fly off by a flick of a finger bc of how thin the art is lol.