
There is a talent and balance to writing a morally grey character or an anti hero who you can sympathise with, author missed the mark. The bonus story was the nail in the coffin. What a load of crap!! Neither the Seme nor the Uke even had personalities. The seme could’ve done anything else but what he did to reach his goal. Nothing he did was worth it i was laughing at the end because i was like okay… sure those were your only options. What a joke!!

The ML is arrogant and rude at the beginning but those complaining can’t be serious BL readers. His rude yes, but he isn’t leading the MC on, his not toxic, his not abusing the MC mentally or Physically and he damn sure didn’t rape the MC i mean we all know what he could’ve have been like if he was your typical ML of your average BL and his not and most of y’all will happily carry on reading those types of plots, with the worst of the worst ML >>>> Jinx millions of views and popularity anyone????
So I can’t really take it seriously that a rude ML is where you draw the line and drop the story. Smh!!!
Most lawyers are dickheads in fact it’s one of the professions with the highest numbers of psychopaths not that the ML is a psychopath but him being an arrogant jerk is pretty common in his profession.
Ive read the novel and honestly once they are both on the same track their relationship is honestly amazing and its really well written.

They can't handle characters actually having some personality and depth and not just thinking of sex all the time .
Like tbh if it would be your typical bl , it would be something like i need to have sex regularly or i lose my mind and make the mc his sex partner(AND THEY EAT THAT SHIT UP)
It's so fucking rare for the characters' first time being intimate is actually intimate

Ace is a selfish brat but it’s pretty obvious to king anyway that jay was falling in love with ace the selfish brat. I dunno imagine being immortal and watching the love of your life falling in love with your “son”. Even king had lived he would’ve been miserable and Jay would be bouncing back and forth between the two.
Don’t think Jay and Ace would last, Ace is much too immature and impulsive I give it a 100 years before Jay kills him self and Ace finds someone else.
The author needs to pick a struggle it’s either plot or smut because I don’t know wtf is going on anymore. I don’t really care for the smut as much the plot seems interesting but keeps getting derailed. This can’t be the same author who wrote Full volume? My expectations keep dwindling with each chapter.