Riva_phoneix May 8, 2025 2:23 pm

There is a talent and balance to writing a morally grey character or an anti hero who you can sympathise with, author missed the mark. The bonus story was the nail in the coffin. What a load of crap!! Neither the Seme nor the Uke even had personalities. The seme could’ve done anything else but what he did to reach his goal. Nothing he did was worth it i was laughing at the end because i was like okay… sure those were your only options. What a joke!!

Riva_phoneix May 8, 2025 1:32 am

The ML is arrogant and rude at the beginning but those complaining can’t be serious BL readers. His rude yes, but he isn’t leading the MC on, his not toxic, his not abusing the MC mentally or Physically and he damn sure didn’t rape the MC i mean we all know what he could’ve have been like if he was your typical ML of your average BL and his not and most of y’all will happily carry on reading those types of plots, with the worst of the worst ML >>>> Jinx millions of views and popularity anyone????

So I can’t really take it seriously that a rude ML is where you draw the line and drop the story. Smh!!!

Most lawyers are dickheads in fact it’s one of the professions with the highest numbers of psychopaths not that the ML is a psychopath but him being an arrogant jerk is pretty common in his profession.

Ive read the novel and honestly once they are both on the same track their relationship is honestly amazing and its really well written.

    Tad May 8, 2025 2:42 am

    They can't handle characters actually having some personality and depth and not just thinking of sex all the time .

    Like tbh if it would be your typical bl , it would be something like i need to have sex regularly or i lose my mind and make the mc his sex partner(AND THEY EAT THAT SHIT UP)


    It's so fucking rare for the characters' first time being intimate is actually intimate

Riva_phoneix May 6, 2025 10:42 pm

Ace is a selfish brat but it’s pretty obvious to king anyway that jay was falling in love with ace the selfish brat. I dunno imagine being immortal and watching the love of your life falling in love with your “son”. Even king had lived he would’ve been miserable and Jay would be bouncing back and forth between the two.

Don’t think Jay and Ace would last, Ace is much too immature and impulsive I give it a 100 years before Jay kills him self and Ace finds someone else.

Riva_phoneix May 6, 2025 10:04 pm

8.1 rating??? This doesn’t even have anything to do with revenge the wolf just wanted the doctor to himself to fuck… waste of time.

Riva_phoneix May 6, 2025 9:40 pm

Well he certainly has mood swings like an 18 year old… at least the author didn’t try to bother to act like he was wiser beyond his years. I do think he understood what his feelings were and what he wanted. It works for them both i guess.

Riva_phoneix April 28, 2025 8:40 pm

The first story and the author nim story I want more…

Riva_phoneix April 28, 2025 8:07 pm

The art offended me… I couldn’t get past the ugly facial expressions and whatever else was going on.

Riva_phoneix April 16, 2025 10:55 pm

Im very surprised the author hasn’t released anything new considering how popular this BL was…

    vince April 18, 2025 12:02 pm

    fr, and the author doesn't have socials so I can't cope with how this series ended years ago :((

Riva_phoneix April 11, 2025 1:31 pm

Bruh if you have to introduce an amnesia arc in side stories just end the story man. It’s okay to finish up the story and move on if you have run out of ideas. Instead of cheapening it with such a lazy plot.

    Yusoii April 11, 2025 6:18 pm

    Um what? Are you the author? If you don’t like it, leave please LOL. You act like you can even write a single story, bffr.

    Athena April 18, 2025 12:33 am
    Um what? Are you the author? If you don’t like it, leave please LOL. You act like you can even write a single story, bffr. Yusoii

    do you have to be the author to express your opinion? you sound dumb as hell.

Riva_phoneix April 10, 2025 11:22 pm

It had all the ingredients but didn’t quite get there, i feel like the story was meant to be longer but was cut short for some reason. It’s good but could have been better. Their bodies are drawn *chefs kiss but the penetration sex scenes just looked uncomfortable rather than enjoyable to read there wasn’t really love making just banging away forcefully.

    Mxyztree April 20, 2025 9:56 pm

    I felt the same way. I felt like the story was missing something, but I can't put my finger on it.

    Dani May 1, 2025 3:19 am

    I feel like this happens everytime with their works too, i was waiting for more when we saw him talk abt what the ML did to get close to the MC
    I’m so sad too i really like the concept :(

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