Riva_phoneix created a topic of Steel Under Silk

So judging by the authors notes, i think the ML will kill himself in season 3 if what they say is that he will regret his actions in season 2 so badly that he wants to rip his heart out or gauge his eyes out.

Either ML kills himself or he gets killed.

There are 100s of BLs with smut what does it matter if you read one that doesn’t have smut? Its not like we are starved of Yaoi

Riva_phoneix created a topic of Under the Green Light

Oh the author is definitely doing a dark tragic story next hahaha.

I dunno i never considered UGL as something that would have unhappy ending don’t really see how it would’ve fit into the story thankfully someone intervened you can tell both characters just always wanted peace in their futures.

Riva_phoneix created a topic of Rivalry

Where is the uploader even finding these images of deku? Like what do you type in on the internet very odd….

Anyway i loved the authors previous works and the story telling was refreshing and nice but with this one I don’t think the author really knew how to make their relationship work. I mean it’s admirable having a ML with some sort neurodivergence but i mean it doesn’t really work because they made the MC to immature. The relationship is a bust and goes around in circles its cringey reading them at this point.

Riva_phoneix created a topic of Payment for the Ride

He definitely should not be having sex with her, she is clearly has been sexually abused and doesn’t know anything. Yikes!!!

Riva_phoneix created a topic of Sugar Rain

Even 3 year olds have more maturity and better communication. Two grown men acting like this fr fr? I feel sorry for the poor kid they have to raise.

Finally this ship sailing hopefully it satiates the thirst for BL of the other i wont mention fan service.

This is the type of that implodes painfully and slowly because the weak MC will just wither away slowly and ends up an empty shell whilst the ML desperately tries to hang on to an empty shell and bring it back to life. Pathetic but thats what happens when you’re weak of heart and mind.

Riva_phoneix created a topic of Demon Confinement

7 chapters of me waiting for something interesting to actually happen

Another useless guide verse plot with rape and abuse from beginning till end. Whats the point of it being a reborn plot line if nothing changes and the bottom finds himself in the exact same situation. Fuck these idiotic authors

Riva_phoneix created a topic of Sura's Lover

That dude is lying to himself about no regrets i betcha in those dreams his free from being sura and the MC loves him freely. Zero chance he doesn’t wish it was that way irl. He knows he fucked up so he comforts himself with saying its fate blah blah. You wouldn’t be writing delusional letters about picnics and make belief bliss if you were truly happy with the way it ended up.

Riva_phoneix created a topic of Stay With Me

Author couldn’t quite get to the finish line to execute the plot so gave up… the last chapters and art seem half assed.

Riva_phoneix created a topic of Defense Mechanism

The ex is a grown ass man acting so pathetic, put you big boy panties on you chose your career over love. Does he really think he can force a grown man to love him again seriously

Riva_phoneix created a topic of Reverse Thinking

These authors tag these plots as psychological but you never actually see anything psychological going on or any real attempt at explaining the characters motivations and mental health or personality disorders that makes them behave in the way that they do. What are the odds that two rapists would rape each other at some point in their lives.

They just go rape, revenge and more rape. It’s like okay but what is the reason? Are they a sociopath, psychopath, sexual sadist, it’s always some loose shallow reason thats just meant to suffice enough rather than a well thought out character development. Then to add insult to injury they romanticise the whole thing.

Okay if you just like to draw men get raped and other forms of abuse do that but framing it as psychological when you can’t be bothered to actually put in real psychological elements into the plot is pathetic. I would respect an author who just said i like to draw men getting violated.

If these authors insist on using rape as the main plot device then at least give it the respect it deserves instead of some BS!! This is why I hold killing stalking to a high standard in terms of how they dealt with an actual psychological BL that involves rape or coercion or even the beast must die and back to school. The authors actually have depth.

Riva_phoneix created a topic of Desire

Damn i swear literally more than half the new Bls coming out in past few months are just short stories. With that being said art was nice but plot was a dud. Honestly Angst does not = good plot i wish BL authors understood this.

I really would love to know the thought process behind the authors thinking when they came up with this story because it’s truly mind boggling.

Riva_phoneix created a topic of Sekaiichi Hatsukoi

In that year they also managed to drink from the fountain of youth and look 10 years younger

Riva_phoneix created a topic of Salvation Spirit

I can deal with a lot of plot lines but i can’t stand a bitchass with no self respect, come on dignity isn’t something you should ever compromise. Nothing more pathetic than a sucka. The MC is a birdbrain

Riva_phoneix created a topic of Strong Wind Blasted

Are those working conditions legal? Dudes asshole must be screaming at this point

The novel isn’t a long one so the plot isn’t fast for anyone wandering once they are together they stay together and get rid of some nuisances whilst others are put in their place by both of them. Puppy is actually badass.