
im disappointed. I’ve read the author’s previous story before this and it was so bad, the whole story has so much bad drama, there’s a lot of forced sexual assault and pain in the story and I was extremely dissatisfied with how it turned out. I read this because maybe it would change, maybe, but I’m disappointed agin. It’s another case of forced sexual assault, and the author didn’t take in consideration all the different problems in this story. Dojin seems like the victim here even tho he is the one that kept forcing himself onto Hyesung, and it’s not like there’s enough character development to see if he’s ever changed. From the path that this is going to, Hyesung is forced to be Dojin’s mate after the situation that was caused by Dojin. I don’t like both characters tbh, they don’t have any redeeming qualities, this whole story seems to be a lack of planning and has a lack of redeeming qualities for both of the characters. At this point, I don’t even think that Dojin loves Hyesung. I don’t even remember any specific moments that made me think that he’s in love, it’s more his alpha qualities rather than himself. Overall, disappointed. I don’t think I’ll be reading this author again after another sexual assault based story, it’s u comfortable and just never ends out well in her stories.

I believe your real issue here is that you simply don't like this kind of dramatic BL romance. It's funny to see you being disappointed as if you had professionally analyze this manhwa, but in reality you just simply don't like this kind of story. In short, no matter how "good" this manga is, you'd never like it anyway if your reason of disappointment is due to the intensity of drama amd sexual contents. For your own good, I advice you to stop reading yaoi or at least try looking for stories that has no drama tag in it.

uh no, this story was badly written and disorganized and ignores the basic necessities of a good romance.
The creator should be including everything important or that's needed to tell their story in the actual story itself and not in other mediums like twitter. They can put extra bits, spin-offs, or tid-bits of their thoughts out on twitter, but the focus and vital details have to be included in the actual work itself to have effect.

unless Fargo's (the creator's) true intent was for this to be a tragedy, but started it off with "romance" to have the tragic twist at the end, as long as you've read the story right and not mistaken or confused anything than for what it truly is, that is.
That would be amazing and I would love Fargo for it.

No no no, it’s not simply just that. This was fun to read until it just progressively made me more confused the more I read it. At this point, we haven’t seen Dojin reallt are Hyesung more than a muse, and I feel like the author is missing some key info because I don’t feel anything from him. The fact that I don’t see Fargo focusing on the fact that it’s kind of rape is also what disappoints me. There’s one more chapter left in this story, I have no idea how she’s going to resolve everything so quickly, it seems that she might make a rushed and unsatisfied ending. Drama manwhas are good, I read them all the time, but you don’t understand that there’s too many missing info that the story just feels incomplete. If she’s trying to make them in a happy relationship at the end, it’s not going to feel right from a reader’s standpoint. It’s not that I don’t like the general plot of this story, I wouldn’t have read it if I didn’t like the fact that it’s dramatic, but the lack of characterization from certain characters and the overall pace of this story isn’t the best. I think this story had great potential, she just had a difficult time adding stuff into the story to the point where it doesn’t feel right. I’m open to opposing opinions though, I’m not particularly fighting anyone, it’s just my viewpoint.

Spoilers of chapter 5
Please don’t report I’m just doing this for people that can’t afford to buy it on renta, a lot of people wouldn’t like to see the raws and at least know what happens in the next chapter.
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The sene knows that he loves the uke, the while halter shows him getting to know the uke and slowly falling in love with him. In the memories it shows him slowly starting to forget the bro I think and slowly fall more and more for the uke. Also, I think they might’ve broken up but the same can’t bring himself to say that he’s sorry or what’s really happening. They fight, and the sene seems very mad with himself. After the chapter shows all the happy memories, it cuts to the present where it is seen that the uke cut his hair short and the seme looking horrified/scared/shocked. He couldn’t bring himself to say anything to the uke out of regret or guilt or just shame, but seeing how the uke has already moved on, he’s shocked. My theory is that throughout them falling in love, the seme started to fall out of love with his brother, as you can see him fighting the urge to think about his bro, then thinking about the uke and stopping and smiling. But maybe he fell in love again after his brother got rejected; and that made him feel more worse. I would like to see where this goes!

Am I weird? I was reading the raws and saw that Natski was getting beaten and stuff and absolutely felt nothing. I didn’t feel bad for him, I didn’t think that it was too much, honestly I thought that he deserved it. He cheated more than once, lied multiple times and still didn’t have the courage to bring it up to arata. If he cheated once then it might’ve been ok, and if he just told arata in the first place then it wouldn’t have gone to this extent. But even after he cried and thought about arata so many times, even after all that, he still ended up wanting to have sex with another person and forgot his own lover’s face. At this point I literally wanted him dead. Am I weird? Am I the only one who felt this?

pLEASE don’t read it on mangago. You can read it for free, support the author and better quality if you get WEBTOON. Please, you’re really supporting the author if you read it there, and it’s much more better there anyways! Plus it’s free so I don’t get why you should pass up on such a good deal

because the author doesn't make any money back from here. So they have to spend more time making money to have things like food and rent instead of being able to draw more chapters for us to enjoy. So yeah, no difference in your little world, until they can no longer produce and suddenly you can't read.

Yeah this is also free, but if you even want to keep seeing more from this author it’s best to support them on where they mainly post which is on WEBTOON. Maybe you’re lazy, maybe you don’t feel like supporting the author even though it’s FREE. If you want to keep seeing more from this author read where it’s better! Honestly, do you want the author to not be able to pay rent, make more content to their readers, get meals, etc. just because you’re lazy and don’t want to bother with supporting them?

Did siwon not even listen to what his friend said??? He said that he should talk to jinha and not give up but the first thing he does when he talks to jinha is to call him bad things??? I swear I can’t deal with this like I want to drop this so bad but I want to see if siwon will even be a good boyfriend and idk
read the raws and i honestly think the both of them need professional help, like (spoiler spoiler)the seme throws up cause he got a trigger from something the uke said, and seems that he also has a past with self harm. it seems like jes trying to hide his past and ignore it, not only for himself but for the uke? i think that's why he glossed over what the uke said cause hes trying to make him not think abt all the bad things,,, idk what's gonna happen