
Don’t get me wrong this is very cute and fluffy—
But for some reason it did nothing for me... I’m not sure why.

I don't want to be rude to the author, but it lacks emotion ... it should be longer ... describing how he fell in love, why he decided to have the baby, how the pregnancy was all by himself, how raising his child was (not just one page but more explicit) ... and the seme, i can't seem to figure him out ... i gues we need to wait ... i think overall it's too short

you're right. the characters are one dimensional despite the backstory. the good back story was when they slept together and the uke ran away, but after that, the flashbacks aren't pulling me in because the uke is just pining over the seme from afar and it doesn't give justice to the good drawing. the story in itself missed the mark after the seme found out he has a kid.

Brah i looked at the raws. Seriously I’d be thrilled if it gets translated at some point. I’d love to actually understand what they r saying. I saw some comments that started to not like it after reading the raws but like I’m glad I still decided to read it cuz I liked it sooooo. I still think it’s worth a look!
Bro, Fan boy its all gud my G. Youll just have a gud ol naked time together and get on with ur life -- Its just a shower and the rest have see Star naked so why not take this opportunity to take a look at ur man's ASSets *wink wink* (=・ω・=)