Cyrano's Topics (213)

I agree with you. Although I love yaoi manga, even when there are rape scenes in it, I feel like most people don't understand what rape and consent is, and that is really worrying. Especially since the rape culture teaches boy that it is an entitlement and that women need to be "careful"

what a load of bullshit

Well, this isn't even yaoi, this is porn.
I think if you're going to draw a rape story, you should draw it the way it really is, without making the victim "react positively in spite of himself" all of a sudden, as it so often is done. That strikes me as hypocrisy! A story about a real, cruel rape can be fun to read, simply because you can enjoy the fact that it isn't you who's the victim, since it's just a drawing! So why make it a bland, half-baked rape-but-not-really-rape? Many people fantasize over being raped. And manga IS fantasy, so why not do it the real way? If the drawings are good, no one will protest.

I really don't understand why you had to make this point, some people (such as my sister) enjoy this as it is. There is nothing wrong with the art or the way the yaoi hentai plot plays out. what you said was completely unnecessary and uncalled for. Not to mention the fallacy you just pulled by assuming that just because the art is good no one will protest. Might I just say that you need to think before you type and post
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Your sister likes it, good for her. I don't, I seem to be more demanding, as for the story line and the art work of a comic. And as Nyanko above here wrote: telling stories about rapes that turn out to be "liked" by the victim, in other words telling that rape isn't in fact a big deal, makes kids think it's normal. It tells them a bad lesson, and art shouldn't do that. Real rape is painful and humiliating; it should be depicted as such, not as a fun game. That's the difference between art and porn!
If you're going to draw a rape scene, tell it like it is. If it is good art, then people will admire it. If both the story AND the drawings are poorly, then only very undemanding people will think it's good because they can't tell good from bad, I suppose.

Just make your own comic.

Ha ha ha that's funny X-D
I've been making comics all my life, ever since I was a small kid. It's actually my job, and I'm an old man now, so I've really 'been there, done that'. That's why I allow myself to criticize some of the other comic drawers; if I couldn't draw to save my life, I don't think I'd have the right. But I actually am a LOT better than this mangaka, even if I say so myself. It's not even all that braggy a claim to be better than this; he/se is REALLY bad. Trust me, I know.

You are a professional Belgian comic drawer? I'm sorry if this message seems really random or rude, but I got interested when you said that, as I am from Belgium myself and love to read comics...

I have to see it to believe it. Post a link to your work please?

Oh! Aha! Nice to meet you, fellow Belgian! :-D
I didn't mean to be rude either, I truly was irritated by the lack of quality of this manga. I'm used to great art, from my Japanese colleagues! And also I suppose I'm a bit more demanding, because of my being a mangaka myself, compared to manga-readers.
You Flemish or Wallonian? Nederlands or Français?

Nice to meet you too. :) I don't think you have to apologize for what you said though. It's your opinion after all, and having an opinion is a right. ('Everyone has the right to freedom of opinion and expression'. It's even in The Universal Declaration of Human Rights!) Not everyone will agree with it, but de gustibus et coloribus non est disputandum after all... (Sorry for the random Latin XD). I don't think you sounded that rude either.
Anyway! I am Flemish :) Dus spreek ik Nederlands :)

Oh, ye of little faith! okay, I'll throw some drawings on the cloud:
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/0B9AzYu_Ng3mLNWFPYVg1OGRTTlU

No files?

you don't see them?
how about now? https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B9AzYu_Ng3mLYTd1V1ZmblBFYVd3b1ZYajRWcDBlWWh3aDFN/view?usp=sharing

They are visible now though :) But you shouldn't doubt him, he's even included on stripinfo.be, which is a Belgian strip- a.k.a. comic database :)
That aside, @cyrano: I really like your art. It reminds me of some comics I used to read at the library where my mother works (she's the librarian) when I was younger (and had more free time to read).

Thanks, Akikochan :-)
I can't show anything that's published though. The publisher owns the copyright. These are just drawings, mainly characters of stories that are in the pipeline still, and sketches I made for people over the years.
I don't draw like most Japanese mangaka, eventhough I use a Japanese fountainpen-brush; my style is more gekiga than manga. But I've made normal Belgian strips too. Science fiction, historic, all sorts.
And I'm not about to stop. But I like to read the work of others as well, that's why I'm here. Still... somtimes me, the drawer gets in the way of me, the reader!
And I don't look at all like Cyrano, by the way! My hair is much shorter, and so is my nose! ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ

Nope. Do I need to log in or get special permissions or something? o_O

I'm a skeptic by default. And this being the Internet, there are a lot of people who blow hot air. Not liking art personally is one thing, but when you follow that up with "I can do better," regardless of whether or not that is actually true, it immediately gives me that reaction of wanting to see something to back the statements up. Not that I'm anyone to prove something to, I'm not saying that, but I will admit that if proof isn't shown, it doesn't bother me so much as I just assume that's all it was then. Internet boasting to people who just have to take the words for what they are.

Nope. Never mind. I see it. Definitely not my style/preference of art, but that's not to say that it isn't well done. I appreciate the detail. Thank you for sharing.

Tastes are totally personal, to each his own. I understand you don't trust just anyone who says something on the net, in fact it's a wise way to be: too many youngsters are cheated by liars and get themselves in trouble by being too dupable.
My best work is actually drawn on paper that's too large to fit under the scanner, so they're not into my computer but in the corner of my atelier, in a big cardboard artfile. I couldn't show them if I wanted, unless I'd find me an A3-sized scanner. Or took them to a print shop and have them photocopied, which would diminish their quality considerably.
An A3-sized Scanner?...I wonder if there are such to buy at all. It would be fun, I guess! Our pages are usually quite large, two A3-size pages put (in ladscape) on top of each other, and to be published they're shrunk into one A4-sized page. It allows you to make drawings in extreme detail, not like those sketches I showed you.

As to your artwork, I believe it, just based on the sketches. Sometimes I'm in the mood for more realistic-looking art, but usually I prefer to find artwork like this manga where I can just enjoy suspending my belief. From a technical standpoint, the art may not be perfect, but I personally also do not find it to be so unbearable I can't read it, which is all that matters when I'm reading something.

As a side note, I generally prefer more plot, but every now and then a PWP works just fine for when you aren't in the mood to really invest much focus on something. I seek out manga like this when I just need a simple way to unwind. I also prefer manga where both characters look (and total bonus for me when they both act) pretty seme. I don't know why. It's just my thing. Unfortunately, there's very, VERY few that fit the bill. (I admit this is not one of them so I skimmed past quite a few pages and only really read the ones that gave me what I wanted to see.) If I had the skill, I'd make manga for people like me, but unfortunately I can't draw to save my life. All I can do is write stories where the reader has to rely on their imagination for visuals and really, sometimes I feel like the audience for that is dying...but that's a different matter entirely.

Nonono, that's not true. If you find a publisher and your story is good enough, people will buy it and read it, even without illustrations. Both kids and grownups still read books, at least they do where I live.

I get that people who don't draw themselves aren't so demanding over graphic quality : I know that from talking to kids who read my stories. They don't mind as long as they like the story: that's most important to them. Whereas for the publishers, graphic quality is the main item: even the best story in the world, a Belgian publishist won't even look at the script, if the drawings aren't up to scratch. They're fools, really. If it were up to the kids, it would be much easier to be a Belgian mangaka.

I keep finding it funny how girls like reading yaoi so much. The Japanese mangaka discovered this phenomenon, and now all girls in the world seem to greedily devour their work! The only thing I can compare it with, is the way many boys love watching lesbian porn. X-D

If you use the terms uke and seme as the equivalent for active and passive party in a couple, top and bottom if you will, it must be rather difficult to get along for two tops, don't you think? Same thing goes for two ukes.

Say, does your panel starts jumping up and down like crazy too, soon as you write a bit more than 3 or 4 lines? So annoying! If we want to talk , why don't we pick a forum? F.i., http://www.animea.net/forums/ or so. That one is very good. Nice people, large panels that don't jump rope while you're typing!

I love that an actual mangaka reads this stuff on here :)

Well, I was a mangaka as a little kid as well as one that devoured comics, and ever since, I am two people in one: a manga reader and a manga maker. I started when I was very young, and I drew stories about mice, a bit like Mickey Mouse but different. I started drawing realistic style when I became a bit older, my scripts grew more serious: the mice didn't fit anymore, so I started to draw real people. I remember the grownups (parents and teachers) didn't like that at all, at first; they liked my mice a lot. But I had little choice: adventure stories that would be qualified as "seinen" over here, aren't really served with mice in the lead role, are they? Imagine "Lone Wolf and Cub" by Kazuo Koike, (if you don't know it, check it out) with a big guy mouse and a baby mouse in the lead roles, and all the samurai mice also? Wouldn't that look ridiculous? :-D
(Now that I think of it, it would look funny rather than ridiculous. Maybe it wouldn't be such a bad idea? But I don't know how to draw those mice anymore, now.
And yeah, I am interested in how kids think about manga, you're my public, after all! So I read your comments. Sometimes they're very silly, sometimes they're very intelligent.
There, it starts jumping up and down again. So annoying! :-( Better stop!

I get what you're getting at, but I don't believe manga should be realistic. Rape is immoral, if somebody doesn't understand that they're sick in the head. The point of made-up stories, in any shape or form, is that they provide a sort of mild 'escapism'.
All of you, stop being such moral faggots. If the truth of manga & real life is too closely associated in your mind you need professional help.

This cosmic dance of bursting decadence and withheld permissions twists all our arms collectively, but, if sweetness can win, and it can, then I'll still be here tomorrow, to high five you yesterday, my friend. Peace.

@Itzarit: Everyone knows rape is immoral; but so is killing and hitting and shooting, but still all adventure stories are crawling with violence, beit manga or comics or movies or novels. Good can't exist without bad, else we wouldn't be able to distinguish good as being good, lacking anything to compare it to. Understand what I'm saying?
Besides, rape and other types of violence is only "immoral" if it's real: in a comic, nobody gets hurt, since it's just paper people. You can kill, rape, cut into pieces, do anything you want to those paper people, if you feel like it: they don't exist anyway, so what's the harm?

About realism in manga, I was merely talking about the artwork: if the proportions of the bodies are well-drawn, many readers like it better, because beautiful bodies and scenery is pretty to look at. Depending on your keen eyes, one can be more or less demanding, in that respect. Being used to try and do it as good as possible myself, I also like to watch it done well by others. But I know plenty of people aren't half as demanding as I am. Still, a minimum of anatomic correctness is necessary, I think.
I get what you mean by what "escapism" means for you: but that too is different for everybody. Some people want to escape from harsh reality into fairytale sweetness, and some people want to escape from boring and tedious reality into a world of bloody violence and rape, knowing full well it's just fantasy and done to paper people. That too is escapism, you see.
So there have to be manga and movies of all types, for all sorts of people. The more escapeways we have at our disposal, the less chance there is we might try and do bad things (or stupid things) in reality.

@Youreadthiswrong: I have no idea what you're talking about ┑(￣Д ￣)┍

I totally agree, I also tend to criticize Manga art but I usually let it slide if the story is really good making it worth reading, but this one had all the negative things that happened resolve way too quickly....weakly built I guess. I draw a lot so hands and feet are always things I look at in Mangas I read cuz some are just insanely bad, I wanna try making a Manga o.o or a webtoon, do you make a decent/good living being a mangaka?

"good can't exist without bad... We wouldn't have anything to compare to", no, that's not true. There are things that are just inherently bad that you feel uncomfortable around, how do you think children get traumatized? They don't know what domestic abuse is, so they shouldn't realize anything bad is happening when they see dad hit mom, right? No, it's called observation and independent thinking. People feel things on their own and form opinions on those things based on what they feel. As far as "idk what you're talking about", don't you worry your pretty little head. (´ڡ`)

You misunderstood my "good can't exist without bad". If someone hurts a child, it cries, because of the pain; but pain isn't there to hurt us alone, it is meant to protect us from danger. People who can't feel pain (there's a condition with that symptom) have it very hard to survive without severe injuries and scars! So a child doesn't get traumatized -physically or mentally- unless the pain is too bad. When someone hurt it out of cruelty. That is the downside of this useful thing called pain. Life without pain is impossible: a woman who has been a mother once knows that very well. Pain is not "evil"; it can be used to hurt people, by other people whom one could call evilf. The same way as one can make somebody suffer by exposing him to severe cold or heat; but that doesn't make the heat or the cold evil, just the person who uses it to make other people suffer. There are no such things as inherently bad things, even killing isn't, at least not for some people who consider some ways of killing to be good, like upholders of the Death Penalty for instance. People don't just recognize things as "good" or "bad" out of their own instinct, by observation, but from the moral standards they are being brought up in. In one civilisation people wouldn't think twice about revenge being a very good thing, in an other it would be called taking the law in one's own hand, and call it bad. Good and bad are extremely relative, and depending on the culture you live in...

I'm not understanding what i misunderstood or how my last response didn't cover what you said. I see you're now talking about pain, or physical trauma. Yes, people/kids realize that things are bad by registering pain, but i don't know why you're focusing on that specifically when there're other ways of feeling discomfort about something, or "bad" if you will. The example i just gave being one that functions at all times, regardless of whether or not you can feel physical pain. Observation and independent thinking. We all look at things and feel based on what we see. You don't need a scale of "good" to feel "bad" while looking at something. If i see a car crash i know it's sad because logic says so. I don't believe you need to be taught that "car crashes are bad" for you to register "oh, no. That's not good" when you see one. Especially if someone you care about is involved. Our brains function in that we can make our own observations, and no, this isn't inherently limited by nurture as rebels exist. People are raised a certain way and decide they don't like these things based on their own observations. Science is expanded through individual observation, the source of that "subjective nurture".

I elaborated on the issue of physical pain because you spoke of child abuse. Of course there are other ways to feel bad: there's fear, humiliation, anger, remorse, whatnot. But I merely tried to explain my point of "no good without bad" with the arguments you brought in. One could do it in an other way if one tried. But you're claiming that people are able to identify something as either good or bad without any exterior influence doesn't deny that there is no good without bad. They're different philosophical points.

I mean, literally yes it does, but okay lol.

I spoke of domestic abuse, you brought up child abuse and physical pain. Tell me how pointing out that people can register "good" or "bad" without outside influence doesn't disprove "good can't exist without bad". You're just saying it doesn't. That implies that if you notice "bad", it's because you had a scale of "good" to compare to. You even said that in your own words "there'd be nothing to compare to", to this i gave you an example of a method to register either good or bad without a scale. It literally directly contradicts what you were saying and we all know observation works as i described it so we know i'm not wrong there.

Gee, you're a stubborn one...
Bad as in a real thing, a concrete thing, like pain, or hunger, or sunburn, or frostbite, those things people can feel, because they're meant to feel bad. if we didn't feel our stomach contract and cramp up, we wouldn't try all we could to find food, and we'd die starving. If our mouth and our throat didn't become dry and burning from thirst, we wouldn't go out of our way to find water, and we'd die from dehydration. If too cold a temperature didn't feel so bad on our naked furless body, we woudln't go look to find shelter and die of exposure.
One of these alone would already have been enough to make our species get extinct long ago; so that sort of 'bad' things we can distinguish by instinct allright. Nature made sure of that.

But experiments have shown that humans have no innate moral compass: we are a social animal, with a strict hierarchical lifestyle, and if we have no moral rules made up for us by tradition or culture, depending totally of the society around us, all we would show for, as behavior rules go, would be what other social animals have. Elephants and chimpanzees and wolves andso. Nothing more.

So yeah, we can recognize a few negative things by instinct. But not all of them.
The rest is interpreted as good or bad depending on the "context": if we had happened to be members of a tribe that practices cannibalism, because somewhere in the past someone decided that eating the flesh of our slain enemy, especially if this enemy was strong and brave, will make us strong and brave too, we would see cannibalism as a very good thing.
Other tribes who would come and invade our wilderness territory and see us practise cannibalism would shriek in horror, if in their culture cannibalism is a big taboo; they would see us as barbaric monsters. And that would totally surprise and puzzle us.

Yeah, i can agree with that and have been saying the same thing. I said "there are things we look at and just feel bad seeing", as in "there are some bad things that can be registered through observation rather than through a scale of past experience/knowledge". What i said leaves room for exceptions like the few you just gave, what you said is "bad can't exist without good" and "there would be no scale to compare to", what you said encompasses ALL bad. What i said proves that you can register bad without a scale. It was just poor wording on your part if you meant specific bads.

You sure like to get the last word, don't you? 'Bad can't exist without good and there would be no scale to compare to' encompasses all bads indeed, but that doesn't contradict the difference between the instinctive bads and the "educated" bads, as I explainsed. Your claim 'one can register bad without a scale', really should be 'one can register SOME bads, and a lot of others one can't. For all those, one needs a scale"

No, because i specifically brought up observation, nothing else. Do you assume i'm talking about other things if i mention one thing? What you said ecompasses everything and is incorrect because of that, i talked about one thing.

I think i should clear something up, all i'm here to do is tell you "hey, that's not quite right" for the reasons i've stated. This wasn't supposed to drag on. If you look, i haven't been rude to you or called you names. I'm just responding to you, it's not that i "need the last word" or that i'm "stubborn". I can see from these two quotes that you're getting frustrated for some reason, so i thought i'd recap what's happened so you can see i wasn't meaning harm. What happened was, i pointed out that your all-encompassing word usage isn't right, you kind of went off topic with examples of physical pain, i explained what i was saying because you started talking about physical pain and child abuse while acting as though i brought those up when i didn't say those things and since then it's basically (and this is going to sound harsh, but i don't mean it to be) you going on multiple tangents about things that don't really change what i said. What i said was basically "you don't need a scale of good to register ALL bad like you just said you do verbatim" and gave the example of observation to prove there is SOME bad you can register without a scale. Your response to this doesn't make sense as you started listing off ways to register bad and saying that not all bad can be registered without a scale. I never said that. Do you see what i mean by "tangents"? My argument was that there is SOME bad you can register without a scale, NOT that there isn't any bad that you need a scale to register.

Okay, okay.
I'm not at all frustrated, it was meant in jest. You just like debating, I guess. And you DO like to have the last word, admit it ;-P
But since you are polite and decent about it, I am gladly prepared to give it to you. I totally forgot what this thread started out for, or about which manga it was anyway...

Okay :^)

Wow, this is one rude comment and backing up your boasting with those artworks?
I'm so amazed at how proud you are with yourself!
*full of sarcasm*

I'm not proud of myself. Only non-talented people feel like talent is a merit to be proud of. Whoever has a talent knows it's nothing you've done to be proud of, since you're born with it. But as little as pride comes with it, comes false humility: Saying you're good at drawing is the same as saying you're tall if you are, or big if you are.
That said, "with those artworks" doesn't say anything about the topic, which is anatomics...

I definitely don’t wanna be there (●'◡'●)ﾉ

Dukedom is a word.

Yeah, a wrong one! It's got to be "duchy".
And anyway, even in a duchy the female heir is never called "hime", because hime means "princess". And a princess is a female heir to a kingdom or to a principalty. The female heirs of a duke are simply ladies. When they marry other dukes, that's when they become duchesses. But never princesses, unless they marry a king or an emperor!
(Don't I sound like Mister Know-it-all?)

Just be glad it's in english. Stop being so ungrateful.

I'm not ungrateful, I'm demanding where any language is concerned, English and Japanese included. I have noticed so many English mistakes here, I've come to the conclusionlots of people tend to overestimate their own knowledge of the English language a great deal! One should never stop trying to get better, always try to improve. Ne? The moment you decide you're perfect at something, that's when you stop getting better. Nothing to do with the appreciation of the efforts the translators make to translate the manga for us; everybody appreciates that. If we didn't, we wouldn't sign in here and read everything and leave our remarks. Isn't that true?

Dukedom is a word. Although in the case of the summary above, the word duchy is indeed the proper term. There is nothing wrong to correct someone but you do not have to sound bitchy or insulting about it. I do not understand how you came to that conclusion. This site is not a grammar study group. The most important thing is to be understood.

I agree with you. Everything he said was somewhat right but mean. If he learned how to use proper language, he should learn the proper manners next.

You guys are way too oversensitive. Bitchy, mean, insulting??? My goodness. Talk about exaggerating!
Besides, I wasn't even criticizing the translators, but the person who wrote the review! They're meant to attract readers, but if they're ill-written they don't do that, except those who think "the most important thing is to be understood". Well, I don't agree with this statement. If everyone thought like that, we'd soon all be talking and writing Jibborish. It is NOT enough to be understood. It has to be correct as well!
English is not an easy language, but it is a beautiful one, worthy of some respect!

If we consider the fact that reviews are meant to attract a broad audience (ie as many people as possible), then dukedom was, indeed, the correct choice for the reviewer to use here. I can say that if the review started with: "Nike is the fourth princess of the Rain Duchy..." quite a few people would have felt a way about it, and some of them may not have read the story (I'd certainly have been thrown off, and maybe cackled a bit). That's the beauty of language: sometimes you can forgo syntactical/grammatical correctness in order to convey what you want more effectively and stylistically. Case in point: slang. Besides, if you're bothered by the errors in this review, you'll have a heart attack with a vast majority of them; this one, for instance:

"A cat went in the hot-tempered KANG Jae-Young's villa.
Forbid approach to my room and my library.
Things must be always in place.
I hate messy things and clamor.
Just follow the rules!
Darn! >v<
I won't be daunted.
It's not like that I want to live passively and say no other words but "meow meow".
Seems to be acting modestly, and all of a sudden extrudes the claws while sounding "Grr.." like a wild cat.
Kya~!
Now can love be formed?!!
Let's wait and see.
The vicissitudinous cohabitation diary~"

...I've yet to figure out what this is saying lol.

Btw- what is Jibborish? Some new language lol?

Jibborish means galimatias, blabbering, erroneous and incomprehensible babble.
But I'm not convinced why choosing a wrong word would attract people rather than a correct one. What's repulsive about duchy? If you're going to read a story of a duchess, why be put off by the word "duchy"?
I agree the reviews are crawling with mistakes. They don't give me a heart attack... it's rather the annoyed reactions on he who makes a remark about it that surprise me. Now if I were criticizing YOU guys (girls) personally, I'd understand, but I'm not. So why be so angry because little old me is playing English sensei?
By the way, "slang" is not the same as "mistake". Slang is a typical dialect or style of speaking; slang words aren't mistakes. Wrong words are. And "dukedom" is not slang.

Hello Cyrano!

I am the founder of Timless scans and I appreciate that you're reading our scans also about the translations we are about 95% non native English speaker so I want to apologize if there are mistakes we try to correct them when we see them ^^ and we are learning new things everyday so be patient with us. Also, your right dukedom doesn't exist on the meaning what it's trying to refer to, wow never know that ^^ also I know that you are not talking about the translations but I am just saying English sense XD

Have a great day!

See, everybody? Now THAT's a nice person. At least she/he appreciates that I actually pay attention to what's being written! :-)
Dear Eeliejun-san, I am very happy to read your message. If ever you need help with correcting English, you can always mail me. I'll be happy to be of any help I can be! (this is called "put your knowledge where your mouth is)
;-)

Um... do you mean "gibberish"?

I don't know... I got it from the "Google Translate". Put my own mother tongue word for it in there and got "Jibborish". I don't think it matters. It's like "Yiddish" and "Jiddish". Both acceptable.
Besides, "gibberish" makes me think of "giddy", gimmick", I mean words you pronounce with the Google-g, not a j-like g. But I can be wrong: anybody can. The day you think you know all, is the day you stop learning.