Ngl, the pacing in this story was great. Not rushed at all, it's slow but flows in the story so well. But I gotta say, I think we all have to give credits to Mr. Lee for being able to keep up with someone like Yuri . Omg, he's so obnoxious, manipulating and possessive—how is he still with that man HAHAHAHA
If it were me, I would have already broke it off the moment he removed any form of choices I had in that relationship. Though, it's already weird enough that I loved this story's plot a lot lmfao
I love the fact they both fell in love at first sight, overthinkers like legit all the time, and they're so obsessed with each other. This kind of setting was so refreshing to me, just wish they added a wedding scene at the end—Oh my gosh, Jaehan would definitely be the one proposing and Heegyeom just crying his eyes out of happiness and twirling Jaehan around!!! They're so cute. Also, anyone gonna mention the adorable chibis?!? It's so unlike their character but whenever the chibis show up, their eyes are so big and sparkly~ it's so fucking cute!!! ( ≧Д≦)
I shed a couple of tears (that was an understatement—i had a whole bucket) oh my god, their story might be sadder than shiro and tora's hahahaha. Such a bittersweet feeling, it almost made me wanna throw my phone reading this. And I feel the need to point this out—that scene when Shigure was leaving the room before he died afterwards saying "i'm not coming back", half of a speech bubble got covered after he said it. And it made me wonder if he ever said something that reciprocated Haru's feelings but Haru never got to hear it from the man himself. Maybe I'm just overthinking ( ̄ヘ ̄;)
I'd consider that ending an open bitter one, mostly because an anxious feeling secured in me that thinking someday, those two won't wake up seeing the other by their side huhu. Imagine Haru waking up not seeing Yukitaka anymore, or he had died. That would really break the man itself. To love someone, move on from death to finding that precious affection once more only for it to vanish one more time before finally concealing his own feelings. I have such dark thoughts, chat. I loved this so much, would read it again if I can handle the angst once more <3











It has finally came to a conclusion.. ಥ╭╮ಥ.. This story just gave me so much serotonin vibes, it's such a masterpiece. For the first time, a non-toxic alpha couple came to be AND THE PLOT JUST THICKENS THE JUICE. I adore them so much, I LOVE THEM so dearly!!! Ash being the greenest of a flag and patiently waiting for Lyle to make up his feelings. Protecting and defending him—AHHH SO MUCH LOVEEEE BETWEEN THESE TWO (人*´∀`)。*゚+ GIVE US SIDE STORIES, THEIR PROPOSAL, MARRIAGE, POSSIBLE KIDS, SEQUEL, ANYTHING PLEASE. JUST TO SEE THEM AGAIN, I'D DO ANYTHINGG!!!! ( ≧Д≦)