
I had to re-read and?? “These romantic thoughts” anyone else just like ‘huh?’ Im sorry but its kinda silly that he just said like a few words with her and suddenly out of nowhere confession

(for some reason it cut off my message but)- Also why even reveal to her that he’s the author and etc, like I don’t see why she needs to learn this from a writing perspective, whereas another character were to be revealed this information there would be more of a reaction because of the importance of that knowledge to that said chatacter.(Sorry for rant I just like critiquing writing (=・ω・=))
PLEASE LORD LET THIS HAPPEN TO ME I WANT A MILF SO BAD PUHHH LEASEEEEE