Randomreader-.- June 21, 2024 10:14 pm

Omg I have so many opinions on this story. First of all I do think the storyline is very good, like the plot and everything, but I do think it is lacking in some ways and that resulted in not enough buildup. When portraying a story that takes place in 2 timelines (in this case even more) its SO important to really take the time to detail everything out. Which I think in this story could’ve been better.

Adding to that point if you chose to do more then one life, and make it a lot of past lives thing there is a amazing chance to showcase each lifeline slowly to show where it happend that Narye all of sudden decided to approach him kindly instead of demanding.

Third thing is the whole calling him Narye after/while doing the deed is somewhat crazy to me. Like what is going thru is head? He is clearly in a euphoric place so why? (And why is Narye 3.0 not suprised by this?)

Lastly the ending felt a bit rushed, I get the whole ‘he is now trying to get better’ ending but it could’ve been played out a little more. I do like the realism that they ended up together and he still has a (little bit milder but still) obsessive character. I mean that would be realistic seeing my man has lived so many lives and 60 years in between all of them.

Okay really last note; its crazy to be that the protagonist didn’t find out it was actually him??

Randomreader-.- June 20, 2024 6:12 pm

I LOVE THE THRILL OF IT, like yess make the buildup last long we love a good slowburn.

    yaoilover04 June 21, 2024 6:55 am

    I just hope we get what we deserve at the end. Like I need at least 5 chapters long of them just fucking

    Randomreader-.- June 21, 2024 12:00 pm
    I just hope we get what we deserve at the end. Like I need at least 5 chapters long of them just fucking yaoilover04

    Only right treat after waiting forever for a buildup

    yaoilover04 June 21, 2024 1:03 pm
    Only right treat after waiting forever for a buildup Randomreader-.-

    yes like as long as the plot stays interesting I'm down to wait, but you better give me it A BIG TREAT you know. Otherwise it's just sadddddd

Randomreader-.- June 14, 2024 9:26 pm

Honestly I usually am always on the uke’s side (like 99.9% of the time), but this one is just not it. The uke, being the older and more responsible one, is involved with a child that has more traumas then he could ever handle. Develops a somewhat healthy bond in his own way, meanwhile the uke who knows about his anxiety and everything just shoves everything aside and acts indifferent to a child that is more then obviously mentally unwell.

As someone that is almost 30 he should’ve known (especially as a prosecutor) that the seme needed real professional help and he needed guidelines (which they both needed to follow), seeing how fragile he is mentally. I’m even suprised he held on so long and tried to always turn over a clean sheet and ignore the obvious that he was being lied to all the time (he was even willing to ignore his own mom’s death reason while knowing he was being lied to?) smh

ALSO NEED NEW CHAPTERS ASAP

    Jade_D August 25, 2024 3:09 pm

    Well said. I completely agree with you.

Randomreader-.- June 9, 2024 9:03 pm

Honestly I usually always have the worse second hand embarrassment, but in some way bc seonwoo is SO unapologetically himself (in any way shape or form) that I cant even hate it. Like yesss be comfortable and show the man you love them atleast he is not a man that would ever have regrets

Randomreader-.- June 8, 2024 7:02 am

I need to know why authors make characters hot if theyre just a piece of sh**, bc DAMN that dad is HOT

    Malcolm June 8, 2024 7:14 am

    i'd fuck that dad again and again until he dies

    Banana June 8, 2024 8:03 am
    i'd fuck that dad again and again until he dies Malcolm

    BROOOO??? THIS ISNT THE RIGHT TIME TO SAY THIS
    (I’d do the same)

    Randomreader-.- June 8, 2024 8:33 am

    Looks>>>>morals

Randomreader-.- June 2, 2024 8:59 pm

My precious boy Boram said nothing wrong!! Y’all acting like he is gossiping, he is just stating a observation he has made (which is actually a very accurate one his partner didn’t even notice). Like y’all never talk to a friend about a concern regarding someone close to u??

    fagphobic June 3, 2024 8:37 am

    omg right likee

    Alexis M June 4, 2024 5:04 pm

    Omw fr, I'm reading the comments and people are going ballistic.
    It honestly isn't that deep, he just gave him an idea of what kind of person he thinks he is from the interactions they've had. He even said "He seems...". Poor Boram

    Randomreader-.- June 4, 2024 9:04 pm
    Omw fr, I'm reading the comments and people are going ballistic. It honestly isn't that deep, he just gave him an idea of what kind of person he thinks he is from the interactions they've had. He even said "He ... Alexis M

    Right?? I think when saying something the intention is very important, which in this case came from a very good place. Being concerned and stating a fact you noticed is the most human thing to do? Ppl be acting like he bashing him or something.
    I think it’s actually very healthy and good that people notice when you are going to a rough patch, alot of ppl are to afraid and/or to deep in it themselves that they feel shame about it and don’t talk about it. Being aware of the mental state of someone dear to you is so important, so often you hear of ppl saying ‘I didnt even notice he/she was depressed’ but meanwhile if you look really close and observe and know the ppl in your life you will notice the details (which can help you lend a hand if needed)

    little fighter June 5, 2024 4:51 am

    Right? Boram is like that friend who asked by another friend about 'what do you think of them?' seems pretty normal and realistic actually.

Randomreader-.- June 2, 2024 8:49 pm

Don’t get me wrong I LOVE little mo and He tian but I want justice for my Jian Yi, give him and my boy more scenes!!!

Randomreader-.- June 2, 2024 8:45 pm

Gonna sound insane but this is what I think of when I think of the mafia, like ofcourse its not the cool guy that’s obsessed with only you and treats you gentle and respectful and is a major green flag. It’s the guy that has no boundaries (bc he never grew up with those), like no shit he doesn’t give a f** that its (might even like it more then bc he ***up in the head). This guy is used to killing people for fun since he was born. Believe me im not defending him AT ALL, but I think this is a realistic image of what a mafia would do to u (use u and then kill u)

Randomreader-.- June 2, 2024 8:38 pm

The plot is getting so confusing, when did the uke exactly lose all feelings and decided to mislead the seme, when did he exactly get pregnant? How does the butler know? The storyline is good but its rushing which makes the overall story blurry and looses the details.

    scaredofbubbles June 4, 2024 12:49 am

    he got pregnant a couple chapters ago when they were in rut/heat together

    Jeon-Cookies June 4, 2024 5:48 am

    Idk either since I've been skipping 10 chapters everytime I finished one chapter

Randomreader-.- June 2, 2024 8:22 pm

I love this story sm, it’s one of the very few stories which I think portrays teenage love in a (a bit toxic) but very realistic way full of insecurities, a bit hasty and impulsive.

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