
Look I LIKE when ankle chain-kun makes an appearance in BL, it's so tropey and indulgent. But it made no sense in this, and then was completely written off as if it never happened??? When I got to that part, I actually checked to see if there were missing chapters. Nah, it just went off the rails! Finance was entirely too sappy and forgiving to support the captivity scenes. And I say this as someone who loves those kinds of BL. Otherwise, this was a very mid story. Couldn't tell hyung-joo apart from his driver and sons, the same face got me so confused sometimes.

I can't decide if this this super boring or interesting. On one hand I just read 63 whole chapters so it's clearly got enough going on. The premise is interesting and i love an anti social no empathy top. On the other, even after all that time, MC is uninteresting pushover who has had no character growth and I don't care how it ends.
Guys this was a smutty short about a tsundere omega admitting defeat. There are thousands of BL only 5 or 6 chapters long that follow this exact formula.
I read short bls all the time and they don’t feel/are unfinished like this one