This is a completely subjective opinion so take it with a grain of salt. I would like to appreciate the good parts first - both the guys are green flags, the ml is not an asshole alpha and the mc is also quite okay. Both of them are very rational characters and have more than a single braincell most of the time. I think that's pretty much it.
Now onto the wierd/bad parts
1. I don't see any chemistry between the ml and mc. It's just awkward and shit
2. The pacing is insanely fast. They're talking about bonding as mates and stuff in the like first 10 chapters like wth
3. The people around the mc seem strangely coercive and keep pushing him towards the ml for no reason. Like bro you don't even know this man. Why would you be so comfy with pushing someone you care about towards a stranger
4. The characters themselves are pretty flat. No other dimensions except their job and the soulmate thing going on between them.
5. The dialogue is not very interesting from the get go. I read 20 chapters and there's such random stuff happening with no plot progression...just panels and panels and panels of god knows what. NOTHING IS FUCKING HAPPENING. They keep talking about bonding and going out and becoming mates when there's actually such less effort being put into getting to know each other as people....idk there's worse I've read but this is just plain boring with an excuse of a plot
6. Im not really a fan of the artstyle.
(And lastly, if you enjoyed defining an alpha, you'll like this.)
jiho is not worthy of yujun's love and unwavering devotion YET. i get that there's a lot of trauma and background behind his actions but you can't tell me he didn't give yujun a clean break because he couldn't. he wanted yujun to keep loving him and being stuck on him forever. and yujun would've done that...even if he didn't force him to. BECAUSE HE IS THE BIGGEST SIMP EVER. like wdym 6 years of misery gone like that. IM NOT EVEN KIDDING IF JIHO AMBIGUOUSLY TOLD YUJUN HE'D BE BACK SOMEDAY, THEN YUJUN WOULD HAVE FUCKING WAITED FOR HIM FOR THAT AMBIGOUS PERIOD OF TIME.
im not gonna bash jiho for being selfish and, because that's all what he saw growing up. but bruh yujun should've been some sort of an exception. treating him like a use and throw plastic and justifying it by saying that "i was pining and suffering too" is not fair. I need yujun to grow a bit of a backbone (AND I ALSO NEED TO SEE JIHO GET SUPER JEALOUS SEEING YUJUN BEING PURSUED AND PURSUING SOMEONE OTHER THAN HIM)
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