Like, how are you gonna hurt someones son like that and just think you can put off it being seen by there parents. I mean, what even was the plan?
It's thing to say that they miscommunicated but Akira seems to communicate fine. Kosuke is the problem. The only bad communication from Akira was that he previously assumed that Kosuke would just know that he wanted to take things to the next level. After that, he tried to be open about wanting to have sex and his boundaries.
They also really skipped over the fact that he was mad because Kosuke had sex with him in a room full of people when expressly said no. Like, I hate it when they make it seem like they share equal blame for what happened when they clearly do not.
They don't That poor boy He's probably mad I'm still about the situation at the beach On top of it he has someone for pursuing him he probably doesn't like But He's confused I'm not mad at him but he needs to stand up get some backbone.
All of that trouble and he did that because his dad, rightfully, wouldn't let him mate with his twin? Then they try to pass that off as another tragic constraint of alphaverse? Like, what?
I mean, the dude is crazy. He essentially put together a long term plan that involved stalking, harassing, and then entrapping. Because his dad wouldn't let him frickle frack his own flesh and blood twin and had him mated, this crazy decided to ruin Utou. And then they just act like it was a small hurtful matter. Insane.
I'm sorry but the characters deserved a better story than that. Like,
The way things are now, he's just a love struck idiot and it's infuriating. Because he's literally going out of his way to chase after a bad option. Like, he's in the wrong in every way but he just doubles down because he thinks whatsherface is cute. Like, he's not even in love. He just likes having a little bunny girlfriend who needs to be protected. Stupid dude.
I tried it and it's too much for me. I would have stabbed him. Even if was going to ruin my life, I couldn't live under this guys thumb.
I kind of hate when something is made really obvious to the audience to the point where it makes no since that it's not obvious to the MC.
Like, either make it an actual secret or set it up so that the audience knows because of some other character. But don't make it so that we know everything the MC knows and yet, the MC is struggling to figure out the obvious. It feels like lazy writing.
But this last one was really a disappointment. The MC is basically being blackmailed into helping the prince stay safe at no benefit to herself.
Like, as a reader, how else am I supposed to feel about that but angry? In my eyes, that makes me not really like the Prince. I mean, what kind of prince just stands there and let's an innocent person get taken advantage of? And Guren, who could have just been fun and cunning is now just a cruel jerk.
It's like, either you accept the consequences of changing the plot or you follow the original plot. There really isn't an inbetween.
On that note, I don't understand all her train of thought anyway. The reason players felt bad for Laura because she played an important role in Luka's life but ended up being forgotten. It's just bad storytelling. Literally all that needed to be done was for the MC to just not confess to Luka before he leaves. In the meantime, she could have still learned to do something else.
And finally, if you confess to someone and there only response is "Thank you" then you have been rejected.
I wish that people would just stick to the names that are already being used. That's what we know the characters as. You can literally just check the previous chapters and you will know.
Alejadro
Ibelina
Elenora.
I get what you mean, but I always thought it was weird that the original scanlators named him Alejandro when in the original Korean scans his name is Leandro... also in the official English translations his name is Leandro as well.
I get that but it really is jarring. I actually read Korean but I don't read this in Korean just because I found it here first so the name change throws me off. Like, this is more of a general complaint because it happens a lot.