This was.. An experience..! ;; the dad stuff got creepy but apart from that this is peak fiction
This story lmao, y'all need to stop reading the Mary Sue brainrot slop that's so common in historical manhwas. She just so happens to be smart, just so happens to run into the emperor who just so happens to be in disguise, just so happens to catch his attention, and from then on the story is a whole lot of coincidences working in her favor. They're tryna frame her as some baddie girl boss who is super smart and powerful, but she rarely gets what she wants with her own effort. Everything she wants falls into her lap, the world is just rigged in her favor. You're telling me she just so happens to run into the girl that Sisley bought her moon cycle stuff from, and that's the only reason she figures out Sisley is the culprit? Girl bye what type of insane plot armor is this, she's just a Mary sue. This manhwa is a mess.
Whys no one talking about the monster in his pants. Compared it to my stomach and nearly got hypertension just THINKING of taking it. Opened my mouth to see what he was putting in there and DEAR god no. Not a chance. Too thick, too long, that's a fucking weapon of mass destruction. 0/10
I legit commented something along these lines a while back - I agree its terrifying lol
Evb is shipping Chris Cedric and Jesse but Chris is just too young to be with them. She acts 16 at most it just feels weird. Her love for Jesse is also very clearly platonic I don't understand why everyone this she'd go well with them???? She's more like their daughter or Jesse's jalous little sister. Im 15 and her behavior is how I act with my older sister I'm js so lost here
I'm not talking about ship or romance here but, christelle is 19 and the fl is definitely older
this is the exact same as pornhwas written by men bro tf... insane power fantasies
there was sm wrong and it was such a potentially good story too. this was obvi written by an idol fan, bc the view on idols is so disgusting. like as much as i love the chubby female classmate, taking photos of someone when not in a fan setting IS creepy. I get thats to be expected with famous people, but his reaction was so out of touch. if i were yohan i wldnt have been like, 'wow! my fans must rly love me!' id be like 'wow! i truly am a product on display!' lmfao.... also the demonisation of idols in relationships and such. like that inkayan candy was the only bad person there, the others were rude, but entirely justified. fans DO come to fan meets stinky. its just the truth., idol fans ARE obsessive and weird most times (coming from a massive txt stan), and idols arent obligated to love them. a degree of respect is required, yes, but LOVING every single fan? yea not a chance. this story is the definition of rose colored glasses. so what if an idol smokes? is that bad? like does it affect you in any way? hows that corrupt? so what if an idols two faced? are they supposed to be themselves? then no one would like them and they wouldnt sell. simple.
I hate how out of touch with reality men keep writing this dumb entirely unrealistic shit.. Women WILL NOT orgasm in 20 seconds just from getting it up the pussy. Like no foreplay too? And the weird ass anatomy too lol. And the "they tweated mwe wike I was invisible becwause of my backgwound!" Who the fuck genuinely ignores someone just bc their mama poor or some bs. Like I'm 30 seconds in and I can TELL this was written by an incel who got 'bullied' and blamed it on everyone else when he prolly did some weird shit that made no one wanna fw him...
In 99% of yiseols scenes there's some sort of sex appeal, and I'm aware she was possessed by a succubus before but is there a need to make EVERYTHING sexual?
Where?
??? Can u not tell?
I can't. It's just a woman with curvy body. She's not even wearing sexy clothes, which I like.
Her boobs r in nearly every scene, if they aren't she's standing/sitting seductively and making facial expressions seen in ahegao. Her body while curvy is unrealistic and there's an unnecessary emphasis put on her body. She wears absolutely stupid choice or clothing (considering she's a FIGHTER) just so they can show off her body and she always stands in a way that emphasises her body and curves even more. Like it's okay but when it gets to this extent it's the exact same as a pornhwa.
Eh I don't consider them sensual tbh. Maybe it's the different perspective idk.
Since I started off with anime I'm used to fan service so it's easy for me to spot it idk
Can we stop popularising Mary Sue Manhwa where it's clear the author is projecting a need to be loved and adored onto their work? I sound cruel, but like the way it's done is SOOO BADD if she wasn't grown and in the body of a baby, like if she were quite littersly just a baby it would be been okay. if she was grown and in the body of a baby, but actually acted her age, genuinely did something to earn the unparalleled adoration she receives and did shit herself instead of being a whiney bitch then that would also be okay. Dare I say that would be peak. But all she does is breathe and the whole world falls apart bending to her will so it makes the story feel incredibly shallow. Not to mention it's just really like idk how to say it, but this genre is the female equivalent of shitty harem isekais. Idk if that applies to this manhwa, but with this genre it's always a grown woman in the body of a baby and every male in the world is in love with her. Always a father, grandfather, brothers, uncles, male friends, all these powerful attractive men and maybe 1 or 2 token female characters, typically a maid or an insignificant girl who's on her side. Female influence? Never heard of her, cos every woman in the world is out to get the MC cos she's so perfect! And they're do jealous! Not to mention all ugly men are evil for some reason, and every girl that's nearly as pretty as the MC/receives male attention is evil??! This is really poorly structured cos idk how to word my opinion, but pls I beg you go watch a mattybites video or 2 and open your eyes to how garbage this is. It's a non issue ik I'm js a hater
Okay? Move on
You move on who asked u to respond? I said I'm js hating if u have a problem dislike the comment and continue reading your mushoku tensei brainrot
Wow seems someone's mad
Do I come across as angry or are you sensitive
I don't seem like the one being sensitive, cus I'm not the one that's writing paragraphs about how much you dislike a manhwa, when you could just simply "move on" :)
Oh no girl I JUST said I'm a hater, don't have to be sensitive to thoroughly dislike bad writing
god forbid women have hobbies
That opinion would be valid...if the writing was actually bad. Bad take. Boooo.
Hows the writing good then? Explain. How does the author make an engaging setting, with interesting, likeable, complex characters. How does the author add depth to the MC and show her growth as a character? The way she overcomes hurdles?
Why is everyone acting like I'm attacking them, yes I think u should think twice before liking this but I'm more attacking the author n story cos a I said, its buns. Literally no one is denying my points like way to admit im right
The writing is engaging and the overarching plot of the kingdom being threatened by an evil sorcerer king is very classic fairytale
The whole thing is set up like the origin story for an Isekai heroine, and Mabel is cute and clever enough to keep it moving.
However, I can tell you aren't actually asking me these things and are instead defaulting to what an Engliah teacher would ask about some frivolous reading passage. So let me ask you, what is it that you desire when reading manwha? Why were your expectations so high here?
no i was just joking i completely agree with you lmao sorry
I desire literally everything I asked for, its a genuine question. My expectations are high cos all I do for entertainment is read/watch stories, even since I was a kid. Naturally I've acquired high expectations
Mb gng
Uhm... have you really read this manhwa? Because most of the things you said doesn't even make sense aside from the fact that you're a hater. For someone who said that they have high expectations because they read since a kid, this came up as an inauthentic take of a pretty great story. As someone who already read and reread the novel of this manhwa, I can say that this has an amazing and interesting plot and that the manhwa is still nowhere near the clinax part of the story. It might be that you just saw a few first panels of this manhwa and decided that this is one of those "harem" manhwas (when its not). The only thing I can agree with your comment is the "Mary Sue" MC and that you're a hater. The rest is complete misinformation and misinterpretation. Well, suit yourself.
Nevermind, just went to you're profile to see how problematic you are and dang. Okay girl. You slay on this one. Stay being a diva
Not harem, just subconsciously mysoginistic as I explained in my bio
Thanks
Insert Zayne from Love and Deepspace:
“No one asked.”
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Hey this is really late! Just wondering why you felt the need to say this as if I didn't already know? It's a comment section for a reason.. So you can leave comments.. Weather that be criticism or not!
Yeah. Plain hate disguised as criticism. ╮(￣▽￣)╭
It isn't disguised I quite literally said I was hating myself, + hate can be criticism, the fact I'm insulting the story doesn't mean it suddenly isn't criticism.
"It's a non issue ik I'm js a hater" they stated that themself you incompetent gimp