"so, we gonna do it?"
"...you're a guy."
"well yeah, but I'm a HOT guy."
“She sounds hideous”
“Well she’s a guy soo”
Idk but it reminds me of tht
That reminds me of that one State Farm commercial...
Hmmm *rubs hand on chin* but I was so sure it was all state *says in deep voice* ()
Hey, at least she doesn't know WHAT the present is yet!
I mean, He wasn't locked up there for That Long, he should still remember the name of the girl he was going to propose to. He was also surprisingly calm throughout the entire ordeal once he found out who kidnapped him, and didn't seem to be really disgusted when he found out his friend liked him romantically. I wonder...
Yeah exactly! Too rusjed and toomany plot holes
*rushed, *plot holes
but the latest chapter fricken' cracked me up because the guy is like "oh no the rope's rubbing against my body and making me feel strange" and I'm just like??? Wow kinks develop early don't they. (also it's implied it's really coarse and uncomfortable rope so how is that a turn on?? BL's are so fricken' weird.)
lol your comment cracked me up... I think the author only has a theoretical knowledge ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶
I just!?! What???? Oh my god I barely know what's going on other than the fact that these two have some MAJOR communications issues. First off, he literally confessed to you in the 1st chapter why the fuck are you so surprised when he told you he was gay!?! Also how the hell do you get a "not gay" vibe off the black haired guy 'cause he was literally fanboying about how cute glasses boy was and if that ain't gay I don't know what is. (Also I don't know what happened in glasses' relationship with mr. sugar daddy but I kinda want fanboy over their to go all karate kid on him like he did the plot convenient stalker.)
"I'm going to be sensei's second husband!"
"What happened to his first husband?"
"Nothing they can prove..."
LOL. This is my favorite comment.
***MASIVE FREAKING SPOILER AHEAD SKIP THIS IF YOU HAVEN'T READ PAST CHAP 20 OR SO***
Okay, I haven't finished reading this yet, but in earlier chapters he was asleep, and he woke up with brown eyes. So why, in later chapters, does he suddenly need contacts to hide his blue eyes? I think it's just a continuity error but I'm not super sure...
Well my best guess is that the writer didn't have a plan for the later chapters and just made it as it went along. Or something idk
But most of them are still very alarming. 3 out of 5 (or rather, 2 out of 4? one of them is a 2 part-er) of them involve massive amounts of rape. But they all have really sweet endings for some reason!? Look, if you want to avoid any nonconsensual sex, just don't read any of the stories besides the 1st and 2nd. But all of the ones after that start off very... rough.
"He loves this bread filled with chocolate chips and buys way too many of them"
...Honestly, same.