
Specifically, Levi was just very... stiff. and not in the way he usually is. All of the dialogue was very cliché (which is to be expected) but there wasn't much of a personal spin on it. I could probably point out at least 3 spots where Levi could have said something sarcastic or defensive rather than the cut-and-paste dialogue in here. If you're desperate to get your pregnancy kink satisfied, then you've come to the right dj, but if you want to read about these two characters interacting in a relationship, I suggest you look somewhere else

IKR? Levi isn't himself in this author's djs, he's the typical uke character.

It's flow works a lot better. In the anime the intros seemed very, well... otome-game like. They were one after the other, dramatic, and every character had, like, flowers blooming behind them as they were introduced (or was it fire...? It's been a while since I watched it). But this seems a lot less forced, even though I'm only a few chapters in, so I don't know for sure yet. I kinda want to punch the twin brother in the face, though. He doesn't seem to have any redeeming qualities other than putting the MC in a situation where she can actually make friends.

Tbh the part that I enjoyed the most was the very last page where the translator just went "yeah, this is just the mangaka bitching about cooking so I'm just gonna leave * instead". They did a great job on translating, I'm not saying this as a complaint! I just legitimately found that last part funny.

this is the tamest omegaverse I have ever read. Like there is literally no sex in this. There's barely even any kissing. I'm not saying that's a bad thing, because it's nice to mix it up a bit and the series //did// make me smile, but even when they teased at it, it was very tame and played for laughs.
THIS IS THE TAMEST STALKER/KIDNAPPER I HAVE EVER SEEN. Also, the quickest onset of Stockholm Syndrome.
I don’t think it’s a case of Stockholm syndrome since they were best friends before the white haired guy kidnapped the mc