THIS IS THE TAMEST STALKER/KIDNAPPER I HAVE EVER SEEN. Also, the quickest onset of Stockholm Syndrome.
I don’t think it’s a case of Stockholm syndrome since they were best friends before the white haired guy kidnapped the mc
Specifically, Levi was just very... stiff. and not in the way he usually is. All of the dialogue was very cliché (which is to be expected) but there wasn't much of a personal spin on it. I could probably point out at least 3 spots where Levi could have said something sarcastic or defensive rather than the cut-and-paste dialogue in here. If you're desperate to get your pregnancy kink satisfied, then you've come to the right dj, but if you want to read about these two characters interacting in a relationship, I suggest you look somewhere else
IKR? Levi isn't himself in this author's djs, he's the typical uke character.
It's flow works a lot better. In the anime the intros seemed very, well... otome-game like. They were one after the other, dramatic, and every character had, like, flowers blooming behind them as they were introduced (or was it fire...? It's been a while since I watched it). But this seems a lot less forced, even though I'm only a few chapters in, so I don't know for sure yet. I kinda want to punch the twin brother in the face, though. He doesn't seem to have any redeeming qualities other than putting the MC in a situation where she can actually make friends.
It does flow better, after all the manga is the adaptation. The series is originally an otome game, manga came last. ^_^
DIDN'T THAT KID FROM THE 4TH CHAPTER'S PARENTS EVER TELL HIM NOT TO FOLLOW STRANGE MEN WHO OFFER FOOD. ESPECIALLY WHEN THEY JUST SAW YOU HALF NAKED. This kid I swear.
I KNOW RIGHT I WAS LIKE "WHY THE FUCK ARE YOU GOING WITH A STRANGE MAN WHO OFFERS YOU COKE YOU IDIOT"
AND SO THE SECOND ROUND OF BLACK MAIL BEGINS! This is the issue with hiding yandere tendencies from your apparently also yandere sibling(s).
The hero has the exact same story as Yandere-chan and Aria is basically Senpai if he was actually aware of Yandere-chan's intentions.
Tbh the part that I enjoyed the most was the very last page where the translator just went "yeah, this is just the mangaka bitching about cooking so I'm just gonna leave * instead". They did a great job on translating, I'm not saying this as a complaint! I just legitimately found that last part funny.
But most of them are still very alarming. 3 out of 5 (or rather, 2 out of 4? one of them is a 2 part-er) of them involve massive amounts of rape. But they all have really sweet endings for some reason!? Look, if you want to avoid any nonconsensual sex, just don't read any of the stories besides the 1st and 2nd. But all of the ones after that start off very... rough.