She’s pretty naive and immature but then again, like the caption says: she’s just out of highschool, a freshman in college. (Could be wrong about the time frame cause I don’t remember how long this relationship has been going on). I don’t expect her to act all mature and have super high intelligence. It doesn’t help that she literally has no friends or family to go to for advice. The only advice she gets is from blondie that also wants to hook up with her. If blondie approached her and got to know her through a friendship first, he’d be more reliable. But so far he’s technically similar to the black haired guy. Hot and rich, looking to sleep with her, not knowing her well.
I feel like compared to heat and run, the art was a bit more consistent there than here? I still love the art though. I just get surprised each time sion can look masculine one second and then look like a twink the next.
On another note, I feel like after reading both works of the author, I just can never vibe with the side couples they write. It could be the fact that every side couple they write has the usual dynamic of ultra feminine twink x masculine top. Or just that the personalities of the side couples never are interesting to me. The only unique personalities/appearance is usually the main mc/bottom imo. Like heat and run, all 3 side couple twinks had similar personalities and appearance, the only differences were the tops personalities. I feel like the author put all the creativity into the main couple and then just put the rest of the couple with AUs they were interested in
I just got a strong feeling she’ll fck the other dude as a rebound
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They wouldn’t put him in there for nothing. But I would be pleasantly surprised if the author decides to not take that cliche route and goes about her reaction a different way. (Like completely friend-zoning the guy)
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I just don’t get why authors have to throw in a rival for drama. It’s such a cheap way of writing. We could’ve just had the TRAUMA be the source of drama and it would’ve been interesting to have a ML with trauma alone. I swear authors can’t be creative anymore. Why does a love triangle always happen when I never signed up for it smh. It’s a pet peeve whenever authors show one dude on the cover and description, only to throw in a rival later on. I’d rather the story tell me it’s a love triangle from the beginning.
It’s so rare to find stories that don’t have love triangles or rivals thrown in the story for a long time to make drama. The only examples I can think of at the moment are:
Bj Alex, Your eternal lies, only hope, etc.
I will let this marinate for a while, since rn story will probably be focusing on love triangle, and I'm sick and tired of those, I hope in few months I'll check new chapters and the whole part about the other dude will be over.
But if your gut feeling is right and she sleeps with the other dude I'm dropping this on the spot.
I'm not even kidding, I hate when stuff like this happens, I like my stories with... Idk purity? Like 2 ppl experiencing new things together and being intimate only with each other.
There’s no defending the main duo lmaooo, but I’m so curious how the ending will be. I’m actually scared this’ll turn real dark like School Days
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No joke the sister is giving me those vibes. It’s not even the normal reaction of a person being all anxious they’re getting cheated on, but it feels calculating. I do hope we don’t go the insane route of actual murder cause that’s a way different genre. Public humiliation by exposing them is a good punishment at most.
So I came back cause I’ve seen posts about this on social media. Don’t get me wrong, I LOVE this story. But I’m also really confused when people say this story has the best chasing/redemption arc. I feel like I’m hallucinating cause I don’t remember much groveling for it to be a proper chasing/redemption arc. 99% of the chasing was the ML acting like he didn’t do anything and was trying to woo MC with gifts/dates, and then a single day he cried in the snow, and was forgiven. That isn’t really a redemption arc. I did think that chapter was really sad on his part, but I don’t get what ppl say about the “redemption arc.” Lol











LMAO people are so mad but after seeing the ending of the side stories:
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The amnesia doesn’t last very long. He’s cold for like one chapter and then he gets jealous and switches up wanting to hear about their memories, they’re having a nice time and he basically falls for mc all over again. It’s funny cause he’s also jealous of himself.
How many more chaps
There’s 10 more
Huuhh wait so does he get his memories back??
Yeah at the end he does.